Pierced!


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Broken fragments scattered,

I bend and pick each one to gather,

a part  pierces my delicate skin,

bleeding profusely,incessantly.

 

Still, carefully I collect the bits,

Pain exceeds the bearing strength,

a scream within dies its own death,

drenched in tears of rage and sorrow,

the soul disembarks for a new voyage…

 

Futile goes every effort,

In vain is washed the pristine love,

In front of mind  of a Narcissus,

my heart goes helpless and vulnerable…

 

Recuperating after the lancinating feel,

i fuse my broken fragments again,

Yet stronger to withstand the stupor,

Patiently I try to find the end!

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24 thoughts on “Pierced!

  1. Teju January 17, 2013 / 9:25 am

    Very well & beautifully rendered, Soumya! 🙂

    • soumyav January 17, 2013 / 11:38 am

      Thank you Teju! Nice to see you here 🙂

      • Teju January 17, 2013 / 11:55 am

        My pleasure! You sure are one gifted poetess!

        • soumyav January 17, 2013 / 1:30 pm

          Iam humbly touched by your compliment!

  2. 12kilroy January 17, 2013 / 11:40 am

    There’s something lovely about this.

    • soumyav January 17, 2013 / 11:42 am

      The voice of the heart! Thanks

    • soumyav January 17, 2013 / 1:31 pm

      🙂 🙂 then my words did travel straight piercing!

  3. muZer January 17, 2013 / 12:16 pm

    Loved these lines and the title.. so apt.. “Still, carefully I collect the bits,

    Pain exceeds the bearing strength,

    a scream within dies its own death,

    drenched in tears of rage and sorrow,

    the soul disembarks for a new voyage…”

    • soumyav January 17, 2013 / 1:31 pm

      Thank you dear that you found those loving! 🙂

  4. Mira Jay January 17, 2013 / 3:13 pm

    Piercing thoughts on a steel-will…

    Love & Light

    • soumyav January 17, 2013 / 5:33 pm

      🙂 Thank you Mira!

  5. JasmineKyleSings January 17, 2013 / 4:26 pm

    a part pierces my delicate skin,

    bleeding profusely,incessantly.
    ********************
    What a meaningful statement. All those little shards poking you and reminding you of what happened.

    • soumyav January 17, 2013 / 5:34 pm

      So touched Jasmine,you got connected to it!

  6. elamany January 17, 2013 / 6:08 pm

    nice and new thought …. the soul/heart as if a broken piece of glass.

    • soumyav January 17, 2013 / 10:20 pm

      Thank Amany! It is indeed fragile ,still gets fused with time.

  7. Wendell A. Brown January 17, 2013 / 7:33 pm

    An excellent poem! Thanks for always sharing your light Soumyav!

    • soumyav January 17, 2013 / 10:28 pm

      Thank you Wendell for your thought!

  8. momentswithmillie January 18, 2013 / 12:34 pm

    This One broke me. Thank you. I feel your pain and depth in every word. Much love to you.

    • soumyav January 18, 2013 / 1:23 pm

      Thanks MIllie for your love

  9. drsuraiyanasim January 23, 2013 / 2:03 pm

    Very tender, touching and sweet. I felt a connection here. Lovely my dear!

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