Last night ..while staring  at the white snowlight!

dazzling like a glowing ball in the darkened air,

I thought of  the few words that you had written.

Feelings stirred as I read ,

emotions condensed with vigour,

wild imaginations built new  castles,

like a fantasy world created in heaven….

warm blood rushed and  I blushed,

freezing fingers  in the chilled breeze ,

What a series of words you thought ,

spreading  a magnetic effect overall,

dipping me in aromatic  fragrance …

I stood there night long,

gazing at the luminescence…



11 thoughts on “FREEZED !

  1. Manu Kurup January 15, 2013 / 8:53 am

    Sharing a wonderful experience through words. Weaving a new world out of imagination. Nice poem Soumya. 🙂

    • soumyav January 15, 2013 / 1:10 pm

      Thank you Manu! the imaginations always create a world of their own!

    • soumyav January 15, 2013 / 1:11 pm

      Thank you! It snows in many parts of India not whole..mostly on the hilly regions.

  2. Debaroon January 15, 2013 / 12:49 pm

    That was really touching..could feel the genuine feelings…

    • soumyav January 15, 2013 / 1:09 pm

      Thank you Debaroon!

    • soumyav January 16, 2013 / 8:31 am

      🙂 🙂 set of words dear! can imagine what!

  3. February 5, 2013 / 10:38 pm

    This is exactly the second article, of yours I checked out.
    However , I actually enjoy this 1, “FREEZED !

    | soumyav” the best. All the best ,Mari

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