Like shining sands…
sparkling stones
in the sweltering heat…
or the cooling breeze…
I stand alone!
Like waves you come and touch ,
carrying me in everything…
Slowly washing away my shore…
sometimes a little more…
Awaiting
I hear the lore,
Of the falling
and rising chores…
What happens if I get washed away…
gradually getting eroded in the waves…
Have you gathered my tits and bits…
which got absorbed in your dreams …
Like lost sands
…each particle gets lost…
in the gravels of time…in past,
with the collapsing tides which dart,
while struggling to anchor
the existence beneath its earth!
Soumya, this is very lovely indeed.
Much love,
mei
Thank you Mei! Iam glad you liked it!
I like it, Soumya! 🙂 Eric
Its great to see you here Eric! and enjoying this as well
Quite a romantic poem. Liked it. 🙂
🙂 Thts nice!
Only, that there is no one else but ourselves, who can rescue us :)- but again, that is what I believe and could be mistaken…. 🙂
Good to see you here Tatsat! welcome back!
Lovely writing!excellent stuff.
Thanks Nabadip!
You captured the emotions of sand so beautifully, Soumya.. If they could talk this is what they’d think.. 🙂
So nice of you to say that Muzer!
beautiful…. “I stand alone”…awaiting…..” ❤
Thanks dear!
Very nice and expressive..a thinking mind 🙂
Thanks for the kind words
A real wonderful poem.
Thanks for going through and liking this
great stuff Soumya. Nature is a collection of destruction and creation. When things get eroded at one place, the eroded material settles down somewhere else to give rise to an entirely new creation.Similarliy your thoughts have settled somewhere and given rise to a new creation there.
Its so good to hear from you Raunak! And much more to see you getting connected to the words and my thoughts in form of the verses. Beautiful logic!
You handle your pen brilliantly in dealing with love and pain
Thanks gladius!
Simply beautiful….
Thank you dear
Beautiful expression of emotions that all humans feel. We simply articulate it differently. Thank you precious Soumya
Welcome dear wth all your words!
The title of this post is very nicely illustrates your artistic soul , just so was what you said “art in my heart , I really like this sentence have nice day
Thank you so much Stefan! Iam touched that you liked the words and the title
nicely worded 🙂
Thank u Vimal
what a beauty!
🙂