Like shining sands…

sparkling stones

in the sweltering heat…

or the cooling breeze…

I stand alone!

Like waves you come and touch ,

carrying me  in everything…

Slowly washing away my shore…

sometimes a little more…




 I  hear the lore,

  Of the falling

and rising chores…

What happens if I get washed away…

gradually  getting eroded in the waves…

Have you gathered my tits and bits…

which got  absorbed in your dreams …

Like lost sands

…each particle gets lost…

in the gravels  of time…in past,

with the collapsing tides which dart,

while struggling  to anchor

  the existence beneath its earth!


32 thoughts on “SHINING SANDS !

  1. meiro January 12, 2013 / 8:32 pm

    Soumya, this is very lovely indeed.

    Much love,

    • soumyav January 12, 2013 / 10:13 pm

      Thank you Mei! Iam glad you liked it!

  2. Eric January 12, 2013 / 8:39 pm

    I like it, Soumya! 🙂 Eric

    • soumyav January 12, 2013 / 10:13 pm

      Its great to see you here Eric! and enjoying this as well

  3. RAMU DAS January 12, 2013 / 8:57 pm

    Quite a romantic poem. Liked it. 🙂

  4. Tatsat January 12, 2013 / 9:17 pm

    Only, that there is no one else but ourselves, who can rescue us :)- but again, that is what I believe and could be mistaken…. 🙂

    • soumyav January 12, 2013 / 10:14 pm

      Good to see you here Tatsat! welcome back!

  5. nabadip January 12, 2013 / 9:28 pm

    Lovely writing!excellent stuff.

  6. muZer January 12, 2013 / 10:29 pm

    You captured the emotions of sand so beautifully, Soumya.. If they could talk this is what they’d think.. 🙂

    • soumyav January 12, 2013 / 10:33 pm

      So nice of you to say that Muzer!

  7. taniamend January 12, 2013 / 11:28 pm

    beautiful…. “I stand alone”…awaiting…..” ❤

    • soumyav January 13, 2013 / 10:19 am

      Thanks for the kind words

    • soumyav January 13, 2013 / 10:20 am

      Thanks for going through and liking this

  8. Raunak January 13, 2013 / 10:52 am

    great stuff Soumya. Nature is a collection of destruction and creation. When things get eroded at one place, the eroded material settles down somewhere else to give rise to an entirely new creation.Similarliy your thoughts have settled somewhere and given rise to a new creation there.

    • soumyav January 13, 2013 / 11:06 am

      Its so good to hear from you Raunak! And much more to see you getting connected to the words and my thoughts in form of the verses. Beautiful logic!

  9. gladiuspoeticus January 13, 2013 / 1:42 pm

    You handle your pen brilliantly in dealing with love and pain

  10. The Other Side of Ugly January 13, 2013 / 10:47 pm

    Beautiful expression of emotions that all humans feel. We simply articulate it differently. Thank you precious Soumya

    • soumyav January 14, 2013 / 10:21 pm

      Welcome dear wth all your words!

  11. Maxima January 14, 2013 / 3:33 pm

    The title of this post is very nicely illustrates your artistic soul , just so was what you said “art in my heart , I really like this sentence have nice day

    • soumyav January 14, 2013 / 10:23 pm

      Thank you so much Stefan! Iam touched that you liked the words and the title

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