There’s nothing in my mind today,

lost thoughts,

confused like maze,

blank looks,

hazy vision…

smogs the scene

and my heart”s envision!


I am confused for what I think,

getting disturbed with every noisy brink,

No energy to carry the work forth,

for some loneliness creeps in  my heart…


What is it I do ponder?

overstressed self or

overexerted shoulder,

less oxygen to breathe ,

or is the the cold air

that makes me feel

chilling and disturbing!

29 thoughts on “CONFUSION!

    • soumyav January 12, 2013 / 6:47 pm

      Hmm! Unfortunately😦

          • Neeraj January 12, 2013 / 7:04 pm

            Why what happened to you? You are our inspiration, don’t forget that!

            • soumyav January 12, 2013 / 7:05 pm

              overstrained! remember I have two hyperactive kids around me!

              • Neeraj January 12, 2013 / 7:07 pm

                I know.. its quite a job!!!🙂

  1. Trisha Dey January 12, 2013 / 2:48 pm

    Well written!

    • skypr January 12, 2013 / 4:40 pm

      you are free to stay in your confusion in the same manner that you are free to get out of it. Actually, whatever you do is just a freewill away, you know. Observe how you conduct your affairs and your action with every decision.They are my best evidence on this subject.

      • soumyav January 12, 2013 / 6:49 pm

        Thanks for being here and for the advice

    • soumyav January 12, 2013 / 6:48 pm

      Thank Trisha for reading

  2. JasmineKyleSings January 12, 2013 / 5:10 pm

    I hate feeling drained. Like SOUL drained. And no matter how you need a vacation if you can’t afford one or a long rest your stuck dealing with this Exhaustion.

    • soumyav January 12, 2013 / 6:49 pm

      Yes very true Jasmine! Sometimes we need a silent vacation without much hassles … MOms specially need this!

      • JasmineKyleSings January 12, 2013 / 6:55 pm

        Where should we go Soumyav? Where do you think we could get the BEST REST!!! OOH I feel a post coming on!!!

        • soumyav January 12, 2013 / 6:59 pm

          🙂 Yes Jasmine! hope u find a silent place for bth of us!🙂

  3. lgyslaine January 12, 2013 / 7:20 pm

    Let the time to time and take some rest for your mind🙂

    • soumyav January 12, 2013 / 10:12 pm

      🙂 very true! thts needed!

  4. RAMU DAS January 12, 2013 / 9:58 pm

    In your confusion we have this poem.😉

    • soumyav January 12, 2013 / 10:15 pm

      Hmm! tht was the most natural vent I could have for my frustration!

    • soumyav January 13, 2013 / 10:22 am

      MIght be longing for a break

  5. Esenga' s Voice January 13, 2013 / 11:29 am

    We need also moments like this to notice and appreciate even more the beautiful ones, my friend. Rainbow without the darker tones also wouldn’ t be so beautiful,

    • soumyav January 13, 2013 / 11:35 am

      Yes very right you are ! and then only we value and realize the presence of the rest.Thanks

  6. drsuraiyanasim January 13, 2013 / 3:22 pm

    Awww…dear, i hope u feel better soon….really sensitive the way u have written down your feelings on paper….

    • soumyav January 13, 2013 / 8:01 pm

      Thank you dear! I will feel better soon wth you back now! good to see u

  7. Manu Kurup January 14, 2013 / 5:22 pm

    You’re confused, now?🙂

    • soumyav January 17, 2013 / 1:28 pm

      we always resound with same thoughts many times

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