MELANCHOLY!


In the melancholic times,

words get lost like bemused,

chasing illusory altitudes…

whereas a song keeps on playing  …

in the background!

 

piercing notes go deep within,

harping the strings severely,

leaving a  shrill feeling …

in the core of the soul’s being!

 

The frictional touch bleeds the veins,

even though the sound resonates,

A song of nostalgic pains,

echoes in the subjugating place…

 

Leaving behind the soul in somberness,

The heart moves with driftness…

brushing  past from  the touching  tunes,

On a casual formal pathway!

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33 thoughts on “MELANCHOLY!

    • soumyav January 6, 2013 / 9:57 am

      You are very dear ! Thanks for going into the depth!

  1. smilecalm January 6, 2013 / 12:29 am

    Smiling to your word’s heartfelt insight.

    • soumyav January 6, 2013 / 9:58 am

      Thanks for the visit and for going thru!

  2. muZer January 6, 2013 / 1:07 am

    Defined melancholy to the T. The last stanza resonates with you and the paradox of the last line – casual formal pathway.

    • soumyav January 6, 2013 / 9:59 am

      Thank you dear for loving it!

    • soumyav January 6, 2013 / 9:59 am

      Thank you dear for loving it!

  3. boomiebol January 6, 2013 / 1:54 am

    Oh like this….the first few lines…so true.

    • soumyav January 6, 2013 / 9:59 am

      Iam glad Boomie ..you could feel them

  4. shawnrjones12 January 6, 2013 / 6:52 am

    Another beautiful work of art! You are such an awesome poet with a great ear : )

    • soumyav January 6, 2013 / 10:01 am

      Oh! Thanks Shawn! and how lovely is your comment as well! feels good to hear it!

  5. Insight January 6, 2013 / 9:53 am

    Awesome portrait!🙂

    Rahul

    • soumyav January 6, 2013 / 10:03 am

      🙂 Thank you Rahul!

    • soumyav January 6, 2013 / 2:45 pm

      great to see u here!🙂

    • soumyav January 6, 2013 / 3:27 pm

      thanks a lot ! for your presence and going thru!

  6. Trisha Dey January 6, 2013 / 3:32 pm

    Wow! Its beautiful with intense depth! I loved it soumya!🙂

    • soumyav January 6, 2013 / 3:40 pm

      Thank you Trisha! great to see u here and enjoying this!

  7. Esenga' s Voice January 7, 2013 / 11:23 am

    What would our hearts be without the moments like these… Beautifully “knitted” , dear.

    • soumyav January 7, 2013 / 2:12 pm

      Its nice dear friend to see u enjoying the lines

  8. Manu Kurup January 8, 2013 / 10:29 am

    Its like swimming through warm waters…🙂

    • soumyav January 8, 2013 / 10:41 am

      Thank you Manu! and its great to see you back !🙂

      • Manu Kurup January 9, 2013 / 9:14 pm

        It is good to be back, Thanks Soumya.🙂

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