DIVINITY!


 Beautiful notes of flute travelled through the woods,

piercing the hard trunks,echoing through roots,

I stood and looked around… searching the originating sound!

Fragranced musk filled the ambiance,

mystifying and hypnotising every soul gratia…

The forest soon became fluorescent,

glowing with utmost radiance,

flashing whiteness diverging with brilliance,

What a moment of  absolute magnificence!

Glued I was to the earth,

But seemed I soared high above,

Having the view of the whole world,

in the split second of the universe!

Looked like I was in an illusion,

I started running towards the open air,

the melody still followed me,

and  the perfumed air I breathed!

I stopped and  stargazed everywhere,

The aura was serene and tranquil,

Ecstatic I was in that moment,

For I could feel the divine everywhere!

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40 thoughts on “DIVINITY!

  1. Wendell A. Brown January 1, 2013 / 1:27 am

    The divine one always surrounds those he loves because of their pure hearts and spirits! So beautifully written, i am quite sure that you always make Him to smile with the words you share to lift everyones who reads them! Beautiful Soumyav!

  2. Britton January 1, 2013 / 5:20 am

    As like I’ve been in a lovely visual travelogue🙂 while I was reading it. Hmm. Written it beautifully.

    But, one doubt: why can’t we just experience the divine everywhere instead of feel the divine??

    • soumyav January 1, 2013 / 2:27 pm

      One has to feel the divine before experiencing it! and for that when all the senses find divinity in everything around us, keeping aside the logic,we may feel it.

    • soumyav January 1, 2013 / 2:25 pm

      Thank you Vicky!🙂

  3. LAND OF FUN January 1, 2013 / 8:33 am

    Happy New Year to you dear !
    Many best wishes !
    May You enjoy the Best Health, Pure Happiness, True Relations, Sweet Memories, Success and Peace in the moments of life !

    • soumyav January 1, 2013 / 2:25 pm

      Thanks a lot for the umpteen wishes and wish you too a wonderful year ahead

    • soumyav January 1, 2013 / 2:25 pm

      Thanks a lot for the umpteen wishes and wish you too a wonderful year ahead

  4. Jan January 1, 2013 / 8:54 am

    beautifully written🙂
    lovely.
    Happy New year🙂

    • soumyav January 1, 2013 / 2:24 pm

      Thanks for being here and wish you too a lovely new year

  5. Meenakshi Malhotra January 1, 2013 / 9:24 am

    very well written. May this divinity pervades every grain of your life! I wish you and your family a very happy new year.

    • soumyav January 1, 2013 / 2:24 pm

      Thank you Meenakshi for the wonderful wish and you too have a prosperous and happy year ahead!

  6. muZer January 1, 2013 / 11:29 am

    Divine, indeed! The last few lines have such a calming effect on the mind.. Beautiful!

    • soumyav January 1, 2013 / 2:22 pm

      Thank you Muzer! Iam really happy you could feel it!

  7. Archana January 1, 2013 / 12:18 pm

    Happy new year, love.🙂

    • soumyav January 1, 2013 / 2:22 pm

      Thank you Archana and wish you a very beautiful year too!

  8. meholysmile January 1, 2013 / 4:47 pm

    divine… indeed

  9. JasmineKyleSings January 1, 2013 / 7:51 pm

    Jesus woman don’t you get tired of being SOOOO good at poetry!!! I LOVE this. It makes me want to run outside and become a nymph!!! When are you publishing a book!!! I want one!!!

    • soumyav January 1, 2013 / 11:51 pm

      Thanks for your love Jasmine! By the way I already have two books published..the links are on the blog page too!🙂

      • JasmineKyleSings January 2, 2013 / 5:59 am

        OMG your just such an AMAZING poet! I always find my self reading them more than once… Even if I try to just skim I HAVE to stop and soak it in…. IT’s a pleasure!

        • soumyav January 2, 2013 / 10:06 am

          Thts so nice of you to say Jasmine! Iam touched

        • soumyav January 2, 2013 / 10:06 am

          Thts so nice of you to say Jasmine! Iam touched

    • soumyav January 2, 2013 / 10:03 am

      Thank you And same to you !

  10. Esenga' s Voice January 3, 2013 / 11:45 pm

    Nature has power to make us feel alive, to inspire and to notice things we don’ t during the every-day rush. Beautiful, Soumya.

    • soumyav January 3, 2013 / 11:48 pm

      Exactly ! Thank you my dear!

  11. Insight January 5, 2013 / 7:46 am

    May I know where exactly the spot is located at? I’m seriously willing for an atmosphere similar to the above mentioned portrait.🙂

    Rahul

    • soumyav January 5, 2013 / 7:49 am

      🙂 A peaceful mind, solitude with self! amidst nature away from the chaotic sense!

      • Insight January 5, 2013 / 7:52 am

        Hmm! I barely find this solitude aspect in me I guess. May be that’s the reason why I missed the spot.😀🙂

        Rahul

        • soumyav January 5, 2013 / 7:58 am

          You will find it sometime !🙂

          • Insight January 5, 2013 / 8:00 am

            Eagerly waiting for the day!🙂

            Rahul

  12. pulkitthesagi.wordpress.com January 9, 2013 / 10:48 am

    Read a line. Close your eyes. Read a line. Close your eyes. And So on! — The best way to read this piece of yours.😀

    • soumyav January 9, 2013 / 10:50 am

      Thank you Pulkit ! Iam glad you liked this

  13. Subhan Zein January 31, 2013 / 11:23 am

    Great poem, Soumya, well done on this!🙂

    As you are a leaf
    in the forest of Life,
    the blink of your eyes
    are a breath of Divinity

    • soumyav January 31, 2013 / 11:30 am

      Wow! Thanks Subhan! this is more divine than what I felt and wrote!

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