The golden wings got clipped,

in the course of life’s journey,

flying above and soaring freely,

got forbidden by the destiny…

Was it the long flight …

that I went on…

or the route I chose to be on…?

my feathers now lay fretted ,powerless,

waiting for a soothing balm!



Which sky has the colours,

to paint my wings of thought,

where do I fly back again,

to get my real treasured expressive syndrome!


Beyond the horizon,one day,

 I discover the varicoloured divinity ,

which reflected the cosmos in a view ,

where I could reinstate my lost dignity!

For the loss of self conscience within,

my heart had pined for the divine being,

I had denied and struggled for long,

to get out of this complexity…


Today I stand on the verge of bowing  my head before the Lord,

The  Only One existing ever who knows how to repair my golden wings,

He is the one who had given me the power to fly…

I will take a long flight hence forth…

with a deep plunge in the spiritual river flowing by….


For every dip that I make,

I shall wash off my burdened load,

 further lightening  my feathers …

To enable me for an invoking  compose! 



35 thoughts on “GOLDEN WINGS !

  1. meholysmile December 16, 2012 / 11:57 am

    Soumya… WOW… I have no words… no words

  2. RAMU DAS December 16, 2012 / 11:59 am

    “I will take a long flight hence forth…
    with a deep plunge in the spiritual river flowing by….” I like the confidence in the lines, the determination to stand up to all odds is well laid in here. 🙂

    • soumyav December 16, 2012 / 1:07 pm

      Its good to see you here and Iam glad you could get connected to the feel! Thanks

  3. Personal Concerns December 16, 2012 / 12:55 pm

    Poetry is that sky may be Soumya- the source and product of all colours, hues and desires!


    • soumyav December 16, 2012 / 1:11 pm

      a great way to look at it Amit! you have added another perception to my thoughts here!

  4. Dilip December 16, 2012 / 2:47 pm

    Beautiful words to make you forget yourself for a moment!

    • soumyav December 16, 2012 / 2:56 pm

      Thank you Sir for the graceful compliment!

  5. jomul7 December 16, 2012 / 2:47 pm

    I like how despite the fact that you are describing physical features of the person behind “I”, this remains as spiritual as it can get. I really enjoyed the way you described this spiritual journey.

    • soumyav December 16, 2012 / 2:59 pm

      Thank you Jomul for being on the journey! It actually indicated a transformation of heart or an awakening of a soul when it realizes its fault of running after the unsatisfying desires and forgetting the real one… whereas at last it seeks for that only…

      • jomul7 December 16, 2012 / 3:02 pm

        oh it’s conversion and you write it so well!

        • soumyav December 16, 2012 / 3:07 pm

          thank you Jomul! it indeed touches when someone is able to decipher and feel the intensity of the thought behind.

  6. lgyslaine December 16, 2012 / 3:25 pm

    beautiful writing. I adore

    • soumyav December 16, 2012 / 5:49 pm

      Thank you Millie!

  7. Priyash Jain December 16, 2012 / 5:01 pm

    Simply awesome….One of the best poems i’ve read so far this month…

    • soumyav December 16, 2012 / 5:46 pm

      Thank you Priyash! Iam really happy you felt connected and could feel the depth as well!

  8. superGdome December 16, 2012 / 5:07 pm

    it really brings me into a horizon of your imagination! How we can go deep into the wildest imaginations with poems…with talents like yours…
    Well written Soumyaz…love it as always 🙂

    ~ with bunch of love
    Super G

    • soumyav December 16, 2012 / 5:47 pm

      Thts so nice of you to compliment in such nice words.your words are always appreciated as your presence here.

  9. umashankar December 16, 2012 / 5:29 pm

    Flying far and high and the punishment leading to wings of redemption! Do fly again, further and higher, beyond the rivers judgment and atonement.

    • soumyav December 16, 2012 / 5:49 pm

      Thank you for being here on my blog! and for reading

  10. Wendell A. Brown December 16, 2012 / 6:25 pm

    So very inspiring! A great poem to begin my day with!

    • soumyav December 16, 2012 / 10:49 pm

      Thank you Wendell!

  11. ANKUR GOSWAMI December 16, 2012 / 8:21 pm

    Entranced by the beauty with which you have penned down the emotions..

    • soumyav December 16, 2012 / 11:00 pm

      Thank you Ankur for the words of praise and liking the verse.

    • soumyav December 17, 2012 / 9:32 am

      Thank a lot Christy! Thank you for being here too

    • soumyav December 17, 2012 / 9:32 am

      Thank a lot Christy! Thank you for being here too

  12. Sharmishtha Basu December 17, 2012 / 10:02 am

    this is amazing soumyav!
    well written.
    they will grow again like phoenix.

    • soumyav December 17, 2012 / 10:08 am

      Thanks you dear ! Iam sure everyone’s grow when they realize and experience this.

  13. Rahul December 17, 2012 / 12:40 pm

    Very well written and a delight to read….. Keep writing:)

    • soumyav December 17, 2012 / 12:56 pm

      Thank you Rahul ! its good to see you enjoying the read!

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