The light dawns upon the earth,
lighting innumerable dark worlds,
which grope in the darkened atmospheres,
dwelling within them sins of jealousy,cruelty and fears…
The illumination is for every nook,
which has been away from the
beautiful divine look…
where ignorance rules and
eradicates love,
for such a place ..
the eternal light always burns!
When will thy luminous presence
sparkle the souls,
waking up the sleeping psyches,
when will the inner light be alighted,
to shine and twinkle even in darker nights!
For the sinners there is always a hope,
of recuperating the thoughts once dreadful ,
For such fallers of the path,
the divine hand pulls them out of the morass…
Hate the sins and not the doers,
ablazing a flame of love in each,
the world can be a place of
lighted flowing creek…
Wonderful words that touch the heart. Bless you, Soumyav.
Thank you Lizzie for this!
Brilliantly written..beautiful and thoughtful..:)
Love it…
~ with bunch of love,
Super G
Iam happy you liked it!
So very inspiring Soumyav!
Thank you Wendell!
Thought provoking verse, Soumya. My favorite is the last stanza.. Hate the sin and not the doers!
Thank you dear ! Iam glad it touched u
Thank you dear ! Iam glad it touched u
wonderful and passionate! thank you!
Thanks Caroline!
Thanks Caroline!
You illuminate with your spirit.
So sweet of you to think so! great to have u here!
Sounds like u studied Maya Philosophy N Vivekananda thoughts at a time 🙂
Good 🙂
Frankly speaking I didn’t study either! These are my unspoken thoughts which have been present through years ! 🙂
Exactly, that’s what I want to convey, In fact, if we experience something even before we study on it, that’s the perfect education in one’s life.
Helplessly, the fruit of labourer belongs to his master not to him. I didn’t realise the essence of this Marxian thought until I first joined in a company 😉 I think u got it 🙂
Of course experiences teach us everything in life that chapters of book cannot! even if we read something noble or essential ,it actually gets realized only when we go thru certain levels in the ups and downs of life! For me ,I have life full of such instances which have brought me closer to the reality of such truth!
Yes, me the reader can experience it from ur writing.
The reader will experience lives not mere hollow words in a work when the writer touches the soul of life. Keep ur good works rolling 🙂
thank you
wonderful into a billion times.
🙂 🙂 the praise of your exponentials grow every time! 🙂
well deserved praise 🙂
Thank you!
heart touching… superub… 😉
Thank you Shiv!
I liked the stream of thought here too!!
🙂
And Iam happy you flowed with it! 🙂
I like how a christian theme informs your poetry. I have struggled with writing poetry based on biblical thought, but now I realize that all writing can easily fit in the scope of the biblical world.
Thanks for this!
Jomul! first of all thanks for going into the depth! and as every religion or form of worship have the same thought behind,it is easier to take a thought of one and transform it into feeling of another religion.The gist remains the same as devotion is the only thing that connects to every form of worship,whether it is for an idol, for a light, for a monument, for a holy book, for an individual,for an elemnt of nature.Its the thought behind our reverence and teh intensity that gives it a meaning
I am in entire concordance with your opinion. I think you should try on philanthropy…
:-)Thank you Priyash for thinking so high about my verse.
waking up the sleeping psyches
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LIKE everyone needs there psyche’s to wake up because there is to much turmoil going on in the world right now From Syria to Connecticut. WAKE UP!!!
very true Jasmine! Thanks for getting into the depth and the feeling
well it’s true especially right now…
Wonderfully inspiring!excellent!
Thanks Nabadip ! Iam glad you liked it
beautiful like light of dawn!
Thank you Sharmishtha for your golden words.
Let the eternal light shines from every soul,
for heaven will arise beneath their feet.
Just a thought.
KC
and a wonderful thought it is Kee! Thanks for sharing
Radiant Soumya; stay blessed
Peace & Light
Thanks Mira for your presence here.
hate the sins and not the doers >>> nice expression.
Thanks a lot!