After days of staying away from you,

I heard your voice yesterday noon,

you sounded same as before,

difference was that

you were on a different shore…


Your end had waves sounding lustful romance,

I was on another with the resonating fear,

you could see the beauty and freeness of the tides,

I withdrew from the thought of expressing my vibes…


Once again on opposite shores,

the same sea appeared dissimilarย 

for our ardor,

The sound makes you energized,

I absorb them for my silent times…


Your temptations let me think again,

Is this the shore that I had dreamt,

Just at the moment when I realize,

And about to speak of the common tide,

you are nowhere there around,

vanished in the stillness and saffron aura of theย  setting sun profound!





33 thoughts on “VANISHED IN THE SAFFRON!

  1. shivprasad December 13, 2012 / 11:16 am

    truly romantic and the emotions and pain are nicely expressed…

    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 11:25 am

      Thanks for reading and liking !

  2. lgyslaine December 13, 2012 / 1:39 pm

    I love this romantic note

    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 1:57 pm

      feels good to hear that! thanks!

    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 1:56 pm

      and its more better to see you here! ๐Ÿ™‚

    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 11:55 pm

      thank you MIllie!

  3. meiro December 13, 2012 / 3:37 pm

    I really love this poem…. very romantic and lift my emotion.
    Thank you so much dear.


    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 11:55 pm

      welcome Mei ! good to know that you liked this!

  4. Bikramjit Singh Mann December 13, 2012 / 7:04 pm

    very romantic indeed .. a lovely poem

    seems like someone is missing someone ๐Ÿ™‚

    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 11:51 pm

      thoughts are everflowing vibrations,never know… what creates what effect and when!

  5. Rahul Ranjan December 13, 2012 / 7:50 pm

    hi soumya, writen very well. its great to visit you again. i’m missing your hindi blog. going there to read jwe stuffs. they are really amazing

    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 11:47 pm

      Thank you Rahul for the visit and hope u enjoy it as well !

  6. Tatsat December 13, 2012 / 8:34 pm

    This poem paints the exact picture of 2011 for me ๐Ÿ™‚ Scary

    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 11:43 pm

      Dnt get scared! I didn’t paint your mind! ๐Ÿ™‚ BUt still good to see u get connected!

  7. Britton December 13, 2012 / 8:38 pm

    How serenely you expressed such a stormy emotion ๐Ÿ˜ฆ U r blessed with a grt mind ๐Ÿ™‚ Sending a big hug ๐Ÿ™‚

    Hey,really love this one โค

    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 11:42 pm

      Thank you Britton ! Its good to see you enjoyed the lines ๐Ÿ™‚

    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 11:41 pm

      Thank you Wendell!

    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 11:41 pm

      Thank you Wendell!

  8. SinPSarkar December 13, 2012 / 10:28 pm

    Join me people! Wish her a ******VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!******

    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 11:34 pm

      Thank you so much Pankaj! Thanks for this surprise here!

      • SinPSarkar December 14, 2012 / 1:18 am

        All My Pleasure! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ Have a great celebration!!

  9. yerpirate December 14, 2012 / 12:57 am

    The saffron is a wonderfully exotic touch…you caught the character of the man very well, I must say…just through experience!

    • soumyav December 14, 2012 / 12:59 pm

      Thanks for being here and going thru the lines!

  10. muZer December 14, 2012 / 10:07 am

    You capture the moment so beautifully. I love the way you expressed their emotions. Just out of curiosity, you write for a random pic or first you have some pen some thoughts and place an apt pic for it?

    • soumyav December 14, 2012 / 12:58 pm

      I write my thoughts first and try to find a picture for it! .for i dnt know what I will write about and when!

      • muZer December 15, 2012 / 9:44 am

        Hmm.. I thought so.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • soumyav December 14, 2012 / 12:56 pm

      Thank you Sharmishtha!

  11. Pawan Hira December 15, 2012 / 12:38 am

    It breathes tenderness with a tinge of playing with tears. Incredible with a plain flow of waves.

    • soumyav December 15, 2012 / 2:21 pm

      Thank you Pawan for extracting the perfect tone!

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