High pitched shrilling notes
tear the softness,
even within rhythmic limits,
affect the musical senses!
Although vibrant
instigative
forcefully they
take you somewhere
away from the euphonic…
to a different land of disturbing air…
bewildered in the symphony…
Whereas music harmonious
with the soft subtle notes,
strike within us the chord of melody,
to pervade
dissipate
positive energy …
Filling
the surroundings
with divinity
purifying our mind and heart
for those few
moments of eternal serenity…
beautifully expressed
Thank you!
nice……:)
Hve nce day!!!
Thank you for visiting and liking! and you too 🙂
WC 🙂
how’s your writing gng about the machines and equiments?
Gng Wl……Now I’m looking for new Business strategies.
Thnks for your support 🙂
welcome! but anyways CAT tops the list in many ways in different fields of many countries
ya..they r top in machinery and equipment class.
Your thoughts are very nice to follow………Thanks for sharing
ALL THE BEST 🙂
Welcome anytime! 🙂
🙂
nice one…;)
Thank you!
Really need to add a “High pitched shrilling notes” to life I believe 🙂 No. Why to add. It’s already playing, high pitch, low pitch N many others too.
Not a writing, a kind of experience instead 🙂 Cool 🙂
Thank a lot for feeling and wondering about it! yes its an experience …not a writing!
beautiful
Thanks ..just wrote this out of any thought! so dnt knw hw it turned to be
its turned out very well as usual 🙂
you are kind to say so! 🙂
🙂
to a different land of disturbing air.
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I have been really trying to conjure this into my music lately. I love the line because it’s a goal I was striving for but had no words for. Only an emotion. This really helped me focus that into something verbal. Thank you!!!!
iam really glad that you got the real focus of which u were looking for ! hope it helps u up in any of your forthcoming work and creations!
Thank you!!!
but sometimes you do need that shrill loud music to bang hard .. just because it has been an awful day and you want it out of ur system ..
when i am angry or sad thats what I do put the music on full blast ..
yes true! but it all depends on every individual! this was my choice and observation about the selection and the affect it creates! But glad you could get the depth of the meaning behind the lines!
Your words always have a soothing pitch that makes one feel comfortable as they embrace your words, there are always notes that openly say “welcome, please come in”. That is a wonderful gift to be blessed with, and your heart sings it each day so wonderfully to us all! Very nice!
Its delighful to read your words that bring warmth and read my words and notes so well! thank you Wendell for this!
Loved the final stanza. 🙂
Way to go, Soumya. 🙂
Iam happy you liked it Manu! Thank u 🙂
Beautifully worded, Soumya..
Thank you dear!
my sentiments exactly.
🙂 glad to know that
i sometimes rebuke myself for this over choosiness regarding music.
If you feel certain words, which hints as an attachment, then no reasons one can find — music speaks finally. We are surrounded by beats of various exploration, where we live to witness tragedies of life.
Music has a soul, and it connects uniquely with our nature. Cheers to life, Soumya.
Blessings and love.
Indeed music connects and affects our soul! thank you for the words!