AN ODE TO MY LOVE!


With beats of my heart I want to write an ode to my love,
who dwells in my tender veins in the  form of red blood …
 
 
Your very presence is assimilated  within,
as you transform and flow in the interconnected arteries…
 
 
Rushing and reaching from the tiny toe to the hair strands of my head,
you make me feel rhapsodical  and  I glow in ethereal wed !
 
 
 
Ever since the soul acquired this bod,
you got absorbed and occupied every inch of the veinal form!
 
 
For years you  ran through  the intricacy of ny delicate  life,
 on this cosmos untill we end this  course of moving with time!
 
 
Where after we move to the astral plane of the creation,
our souls will converge and be one for the divine summation…
 
 
The moments glittery  till I respire here on this earth,
let your essence fill my core to fragrance the whole universe!
(photo:treehousecharms.deviantart.com)
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35 thoughts on “AN ODE TO MY LOVE!

  1. rohini soni December 10, 2012 / 11:09 am

    nice and lovely work….. 🙂 😉

    • soumyav December 10, 2012 / 1:40 pm

      Thank you Rohini for liking!

  2. momentswithmillie December 10, 2012 / 11:11 am

    Your last line made me gasp in gratitude. Simply elegant.

    • soumyav December 10, 2012 / 1:40 pm

      Iam thankful MIllie that you felt so!

    • soumyav December 10, 2012 / 1:37 pm

      Thank you for following and going through this work! yes its magical!

  3. muZer December 10, 2012 / 12:47 pm

    I love this so much. So poetic and almost like a love song. Beautifully worded. Especially these lines.
    “Rushing and reaching from the tiny toe to the hair strands of my head,
    you make me feel rhapsodical and I glow in ethereal wed !”

    • soumyav December 10, 2012 / 1:36 pm

      Iam happy you liked and loved the lines!

  4. shivprasad December 10, 2012 / 1:11 pm

    Well no words left… its was great and as usual I loved it again.. 😉

    • soumyav December 10, 2012 / 1:35 pm

      thank you Shiv for your visit and for liking this!

  5. Lunesoleil December 10, 2012 / 1:57 pm

    Love , Love Beautiful 🙂 🙂 ))))))))

    • soumyav December 10, 2012 / 2:06 pm

      Thank you very much! 🙂

  6. Mira Jay December 10, 2012 / 3:52 pm

    Tenderly painted…

    Love & Light

  7. sakshivashist December 10, 2012 / 5:19 pm

    so sweet 🙂 towards the end I was smiling like a fool, staring at my laptop’s screen..
    well done my dear!

    P.S : 6th line from the end reads “intricacy of ny delicate life,”
    I think it should be “my”.

    • soumyav December 10, 2012 / 5:26 pm

      yeah dear! spelling mistake 😉 typoerror! and am really glad you loved the this

      • sakshivashist December 10, 2012 / 5:28 pm

        i always love odes, they come straight from one’s heart.

        n this one pumped right out from your nerves, veins, arteries, n what not 😀

  8. Jaan Pehchaan December 10, 2012 / 5:50 pm

    Wonderful imagery

    • soumyav December 11, 2012 / 8:21 am

      Iam glad you liked the imagery!

    • soumyav December 11, 2012 / 8:14 am

      welcome here !Stefan

    • soumyav December 11, 2012 / 9:48 am

      Thank you for your visit and liking!

  9. Veera Veeraa December 11, 2012 / 9:55 am

    i never ever seen a lovely blog like this. every poem is awesome, marvellous. you are a great Poet.

    • soumyav December 11, 2012 / 10:01 am

      That is such a wonderful comment for my poems and my blog! Readers like you are few who appreciate so sincerely! Thanks again!

  10. nabadip December 12, 2012 / 11:30 pm

    Excellen!especially that last line

    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 9:23 am

      Thank you Nabadip !

  11. Manu Kurup December 13, 2012 / 9:24 pm

    profound words…

    • soumyav December 13, 2012 / 11:35 pm

      Thank you Manu!

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