GOLDEN FIELDS !


 

 

 

 

 

 

Fields of yellow lilting  blossoms,

delicate , lively life in twinkles,

in the open vibrant atmosphere,

respiring breathing the pure oxygen!!!

 

Wonder what they would have felt,

if had grown in midst of a city,

noise,fumes,mobs deteriorating..

poor ones would have dried in  a minute…

 

Lucky they are… to be in the expanse,

Faraway from the lifeless romance,

under the blue skies of abundance,

drenching in the showers of graceful reverberance…

 

Spreading the innocent  beauty profound,

they love swaying and dancing on the ground,

freely, swinging with the breeze,

gazing and smiling at  everyone around…

 

Rich beautiful flowers 

every petal  blushes and grins,

the mesmerizing mustard fields of my land…

Fascinate and immerse  every soul that walks across…

these golden bands…

 

 

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35 thoughts on “GOLDEN FIELDS !

  1. Tatsat November 25, 2012 / 11:01 am

    Mesmerizing. Seems to come out straight from Yash Chopra’s DDLJ 🙂 Lovely !

    • soumyav November 25, 2012 / 11:05 am

      🙂 🙂 Great to remind me of that! hadn’t thought of it though,it fits I think>> Thank you

  2. shivprasad November 25, 2012 / 11:33 am

    well… these flowers stand for dew days, spreading its fragnance and aroma throughout its life.. I hope we human being develop the same by spreading love and peace throughout our lives

    • soumyav November 25, 2012 / 11:41 am

      Thank you for your wonderful comments!

  3. Ganesh Raam November 25, 2012 / 12:32 pm

    Amazing… Looks like poetry flows like a river in you 🙂

    • soumyav November 25, 2012 / 12:52 pm

      🙂 Thank you! Well it does flow..in what form..don’t know!

  4. veera November 25, 2012 / 1:18 pm

    awesome!!!

    • soumyav November 25, 2012 / 10:39 pm

      Thank you Millie!

  5. Sharmishtha Basu November 25, 2012 / 3:20 pm

    fabulous poem soumyav. nothing compares to the embrace of nature.

  6. Esenga' s Voice November 25, 2012 / 3:53 pm

    Beauty of nature can’ t be compared to anything. You let the images flow so nicely with the words creating images of their own, my friend.

    • soumyav November 25, 2012 / 6:20 pm

      Thank you dear friend! and that is really true!

    • soumyav November 25, 2012 / 6:22 pm

      Glad you enjoyed!

  7. Bohemian November 25, 2012 / 6:11 pm

    It’s so beautiful! Its a medicine for bitter winter. Warm and cozy 🙂

    • soumyav November 25, 2012 / 6:23 pm

      Thank you dear! 🙂

  8. Nirmal Bajwa November 25, 2012 / 8:41 pm

    lovel poem,nature is natural and natural is always beautiful.

    • soumyav November 25, 2012 / 10:33 pm

      Yes Nirmal ! Nature is always beautiful bcoz of that!

    • soumyav November 25, 2012 / 10:33 pm

      I think Iam in UAE and u seem to be caught in its fever! 🙂 shukriyaa!

    • soumyav November 26, 2012 / 8:44 am

      Thank you so much dear for the love and the award!

  9. SinPSarkar November 26, 2012 / 4:20 pm

    Lovely and lively!
    Could see the golden hands! Could see myself getting lost in them! 🙂

    • soumyav November 26, 2012 / 5:32 pm

      thts wonderful that you could see and feel the golden fields! 🙂

  10. Teju November 27, 2012 / 6:22 am

    wow, loved it! you’ve painted a beautiful picture with words! 🙂

    • soumyav November 27, 2012 / 10:32 am

      Thank you Teju for liking this and for coming here on my blog! 🙂

  11. Anonymous January 25, 2015 / 8:24 am

    adapted a few lines from your poem to small children’s yellow day dressing. thank you. your write very well..

    • soumyav January 25, 2015 / 11:02 am

      Welcome back. Thanks for informing and appreciating. Can I know the name of school & place?

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