Smiles within the heart of my love,
reflecting on the corners of my cheek bones,
sending a wave of happiness to the core,
eyes twinkling with adorable amor!
The sun is hidden behind the veil,
of the gorgeous grey nimbus,
peeping in between,reaching the earth
on the ray of silver sprayed gun…
What a spellbinding panorama I see!
here in front of my boundaried vision of lens
gratifying images of jewels dancing in
the sky and its virtual envisage….
Imprisoning the vista so bewitching,
I move aside my locks of hair,
the touch of my fingers speak,
my soul is missing you ,my dear!
Engrossed in self,
where hath thou!
I await for your shining lustre,
Come back and rain here my cloud,
For the heart is burning with desire…
Advertisements
The last three lines for me sum up the way you feel…really does… Passionate and loving one with so many different subtones in it, my dear.
Thanks a lot my friend for reading through and in between!
well i hope your dear one read’s this.. and every time he would fall in love with you.
Great writing..
Thanks Shiv! Actually wrote this after a seeing a beautiful cloud today here in the sky! 😉
Well then probably you were articulating many things from that sky. I liked it though….
We always try to articulate things from nature…and thts where we get the inspiration from!
your heart’s words … rays of sunlight … tickling smiles awake …. a beautiful poem from a beautiful poet : ) thank you!
Thank you so much Caroline for the wonderful words of love.
Beautiful expressions Soumya!
Thanks.
Thanks for that Sir!
nice 🙂
Thank you Vimal!
beautifully written 🙂
Thank you! 🙂
just fabulous!
🙂 🙂 Iam touched.
No Wonder I loved this any way! 🙂
Some more words of love and it reads so very good!
And the moment of waiting you have just put here is beautiful! 🙂
Thanks Pankaj!
Lovely expression of longing…
Thank you dear!
Your words move a heart in the most delicate and tender ways, reminding one of how deep is the love that lives within your heart! Beautifully written Soumyav…as only you can do! Have a wonderful weekend!
Thank you Wendell for the lovely words and you too have great weekend!