Components   of the Eternal ,

constituted with his elements,

pure and divine …

shall always be!

Far away from the evil..

and its addicting nature within…


Sent as mortal beings,

the immortal souls ,

with embodied figures!

to learn and experience,

the world over beneath!


Fruit sweet and poisonous,

warned by gods ,

to the earthly dears…

consumed and absorbed by the fears,

transforming the eternal ones…

into mere mortals of this Universe..


Dripping along the curves,

drops of ecstatic nectar,

essence of perfumed florets invariable…

watery vapours in the atmosphere,

evaporating …

in the air…

with the rising phenomenon…

rhythm gentle,

changes to vibrant layers,

souls merge ..

as one in a sphere…

oneness known,

ne’er by the body and soul ,

ages since it birthed …

on earth from heaven!


But Alas! the mind never knew,

this wasn’t the only truth,

Wisdom brightened the way for some ..

who knew and realized the inner view,

walking on the path divine …

assimilating with the Elysian as anew!


26 thoughts on “THE AEONIAN STORY

    • soumyav November 12, 2012 / 8:27 pm

      Thank you very much!

  1. drsuraiyanasim November 12, 2012 / 9:07 pm

    Pretty and spiritual.

    • soumyav November 12, 2012 / 10:48 pm

      🙂 Thanks for going thru!

    • soumyav November 12, 2012 / 10:48 pm

      🙂 Thanks for going thru!

  2. vimal November 13, 2012 / 12:19 am

    a nice story… 🙂

  3. Esenga' s Voice November 13, 2012 / 1:11 am

    The good, the bad and the evil…how important is to see the difference, being able to see further than the… first impression. Beautiful, my friend!

    • soumyav November 14, 2012 / 10:30 am

      Needless to say you are a true gem ! who clearly goes within the deep sea and chooses the real pearls rather than just swimming around! 🙂

  4. tchistorygal November 13, 2012 / 10:36 am

    I wonder if time could go backwards, and they hadn’t given in to temptation what might have happened. I guess we could ask them personally. I wonder how the world would have held us all if no one had sinned and everyone lived forever. Hmmm.

    • soumyav November 14, 2012 / 10:29 am

      Wow! wonderful of u to go that deep and make my writing worth enough! sure the question really would have changed the evolution! 🙂

  5. tchistorygal November 13, 2012 / 10:37 am

    P.S. Thanks for visiting my site!!! 🙂

  6. yepiratemanagua November 13, 2012 / 3:50 pm

    This is deep, deep, deep…but I do like the sound of the drops of nectar dripping along the curves…you made it too tantalising!..there is a bit of a devil in me after all! Only teasing, the poetry is breathtaking in depth.

    • soumyav November 14, 2012 / 10:24 am

      Thank you very much for liking this and going in the depth! this one represents everything in it…. from our existence,to the luring and the real essence..and purpose.

  7. Wendell A. Brown November 13, 2012 / 5:57 pm

    Illuminating words, with heavenly bestowed in each…every line, every verse more beautiful than the last! It is a pleasure to embrace your words this morning my sister. Your gift is so very precious…God bless!

    • soumyav November 14, 2012 / 10:22 am

      Thank you Wendell!
      It is about the very own existence of ourselves here on earth! the start and the journey!

  8. jomul7 November 14, 2012 / 5:13 am

    This got me thinking how often we fall complacent to lower states of existence that makes us forget the purity and divinity to which we have been called to. This is beautiful indeed!

    • soumyav November 14, 2012 / 10:21 am

      Thank you Jomul for being here and going through this work! yea! we indeed forget the real purpose and pursue and chase the one that is temporary!

      • jomul7 November 14, 2012 / 10:21 pm

        You are welcome! This piece really resonated with me.

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