Heavily cladded with intrinsic ornaments, lustrous hair touching the lower knees,
the cascades that swayed with the wind, a smile that killed many beings,
stepping like an angel of dreams as she walks past the palace and its royal beams,
brocades on ends of the silken fabric worn,riches bedecking blinding the dawn,
crystal eyed,with glittering looks, ravishing beauty the princess looked….
She is the FIRE.
In the jungles deep and far,a silhouette gracefully moves amidst the trees,
behind the leaves it leaves a glimpse,
trembling hairs , unkempt curls,sweetness in eyes innocence unfurls,
peaceful smile that emerged from the core,touching hearts of everyone like a folklore,
words of wisdom seldom uttered,peace beneath glows the earth…
She is the EARTH.
Under the streams of thousand waterfalls, amidst the ocean of pearls ,
Suddenly appears an angelic form,
stepping on the stones loftily she moved,
golden tresses bounced when she looked,
deep blue transparent gaze,watery and reflected the daze,
a grin around the corner of the lips,dimple appeared slowly within,
Like a mermaid she slides away in her coherent gown of luminous shades…
She is the WATER.
On the floating clouds in the contrasting azure,
soars a heavenly being of perpetual splendour,
serene eyes ,shimmering grandeur,
silvered braids reflecting detour,
calm and tranquil aura, harmonized way of going around the flora,
Like a fairy she sits and twirls, amazing onlookers in a maze of twists and turns…
She is the AIR.
To which element do you belong,
one that rules you and your sun strong,
traits of which reflect your nature,
amongst the four elementary forms?
Splendid work of the soul and spirit. Beautiful.
Thank you MIllie.
this is your best poem i believe Soumyav. Its amazing! the way you captured the elements and the pictures you selected are awesome.
Good you liked the elements… and the way i represented them..
You have a truly wonderful way with words. Bless you.
Thank you so much for your presence and blessings.
wow!
🙂
might sound haughty, but I think all four control me..
🙂 :-)they infact control all of us..only some are dominant enough..
I hope mine is water then 🙂
Hmm! fluid dynamics… lovel to be with the flow,,never like to be controlled..
he, he 🙂
Can’t deny it.
It is one of the best, and the words are simply settled in harmony of nature. I love how it is written in parts, defining each element.
And this means a lot! The words from you of appreciation and liking! Thank you Pawan!
Beautiful and gracious, still so strongly can be felt the fire within.
thank you for that!
Beautiful poem, she is definitely everything…must be a replica of you my sister!!!! Have a blessed and a wonderful weekend! Much love to you Soumyav!
Stunning ! Really clever, philosophical and classical again – I don’t mind which of the elements she is if you describe her like that!!
Thank you so much for your words and presence.
Brilliant one with all the under-current thoughts. Or.. is it just me?
you have correctly read!
This is breathtakingly lovely……the way you have described all the elements.
I belong to the earth sign…….
Thank s Suri! Iam happy you liked and enjoyed it.I know ur from earth! 🙂
Brilliant work!!I have fallen in love with all four of them. I think I have am a combination element..:)
🙂 pretty nice