MY TENDER HEART


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Breathing deep suspiring sighs,

in your  long absence

with lows and highs,

for the unending  days and nights ,

respiring  amidst the array,

my heart awaits your reappearance…

 

 

Like a fluttering leaf  ,

it sheds some dew drops ..

bedecked on it by the nature’s song…

Like a gorgeous butterfly ,

it sits and dances,

twirls around the beautiful florescence …

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(photo: googleimages)

As if the river is yet happy again,

to flow and unite with the…

ocean deep…

As the dynamic  bird flying high ,

merrily gliding to the skies,

to touch the magnificient high peaks…

 

 

Alike the sweet flower of the valley,

where the royal bee  swarms and dips,

to suck the nectar of the one 

that attract its  bee stings…

 

 

 

 

 

 

(photo:flickr.com)

Without the feeling of your warmth,

the heart still beats …

awaiting for your comeback,

immersed in abstract thoughts…

The long anticipation, a tender promise,

which gestates  for the moment unseen,

yearning for ventilation ..

Of the hidden lovesome  feelings…

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39 thoughts on “MY TENDER HEART

  1. Rahul Ranjan October 28, 2012 / 3:40 pm

    one thing which i really wonder, how do you come with such a beautiful poem everyday ! And , you describe very nice. Something which i can learn from your blog is to you use new and beautiful words. You have them plenty.

    • soumyav October 28, 2012 / 8:02 pm

      Than kyou Rahul for saying so! its just like everyday you wake up with an enthusiasm to to do something which brings smile,contentment…and writing brings me so! A passion always brings you new words in new form/

  2. momentswithmillie October 28, 2012 / 4:08 pm

    Your words are echoes from nature. You write so beautifully…
    “Without the feeling of your warmth,
    the heart still beats…
    awaiting for your comeback…”
    You have a way of eloquently bring the reader into magic.
    thank you…Millie

    • soumyav October 28, 2012 / 6:36 pm

      Thank you Millie for loving that getting the feel of the atmosphere around.

  3. Wendell A. Brown October 28, 2012 / 4:23 pm

    Your words this morning leave me breathless! Your poem is stunningly beautiful and it captures the true passion of deep longing and pure love. Thanks for allowing me to awake to such an amazing gift Soumyav!

    • soumyav October 28, 2012 / 6:35 pm

      And your comments leave me in a state of joy that the words touched you in such a way! Iam blessed!

  4. Wendell A. Brown October 28, 2012 / 4:25 pm

    P.S. your images were a perfect blend of beauty to add to your awe-inspiring words dear sister!

    • soumyav October 28, 2012 / 8:04 pm

      Many thanks ..Iam happy they created the image and atmosphere.

  5. dilip October 28, 2012 / 5:52 pm

    This is a poem full of poignant expression.
    Thanks.

    • soumyav October 28, 2012 / 6:33 pm

      Welcome and thanks for liking the expression and sharing your views.

  6. Personal Concerns October 28, 2012 / 8:37 pm

    I agree with the comment above. Poignant is indeed the word for this post!

    Quite enjoyed reading it!

    Greetings from Delhi!

    • soumyav October 28, 2012 / 10:12 pm

      Iam humbled and touched by the way you used ” Poignant “for this post… Thanks to you and dilip Sir as well!

  7. Esenga' s Voice October 28, 2012 / 9:22 pm

    Just somebody knowing what means true love can write about it so beautifully. Touching, my dear.

    • soumyav October 28, 2012 / 10:12 pm

      And iam more than happy to know that it touched you. 🙂

    • soumyav October 29, 2012 / 9:41 am

      Thank you so much!

  8. LAND OF FUN October 29, 2012 / 9:20 am

    What the thoughts you always share —Just amazing …sense of feeling approaches to climax —You are a diamond in this world of poetry ! God bless you !

    • soumyav October 29, 2012 / 9:40 am

      Thank you so much for that wonderful compliment and thanks for going thru a whole lot of posts!

      • LAND OF FUN October 29, 2012 / 9:43 am

        I am sorry , I missed a lot from you, I am really sorry !

        • soumyav October 29, 2012 / 9:46 am

          Ii is perfectly ok..u didn’t miss the train!

  9. Daan van den Bergh October 29, 2012 / 10:58 am

    That is truly amazing. It’s like you reinvented the English language and forged a diamond out of it.

    You are one of the few poets I have come across that manages to write with a fluent voice, use beautiful words and still be understandable.

    Happy I came across this blog at 7:30 in the morning… Yes, I have a 2-year-old. 😛

    • soumyav October 29, 2012 / 11:09 am

      Thats a real precious compliment as a diamond itself! 🙂 Thank you so much for being here on my blog and reading this and liking it. Your comment is itself more inspiring..

      • Daan van den Bergh October 29, 2012 / 11:19 am

        Well, I’m just saying what I think and you deserve all of it. 🙂

        • soumyav October 29, 2012 / 11:21 am

          Iam humbly touched!

          • Daan van den Bergh October 29, 2012 / 11:23 am

            Me too! After you came by my blog and shared that amazing poem!

            • soumyav October 29, 2012 / 11:30 am

              Just wrote there after reading your post… the portrayal of the series of incidents inspired..to write it

  10. shivprasad October 29, 2012 / 12:11 pm

    hey hi soumya..
    everytime you come up with the beauty and the essence in every word written by. By now i was imagining, like how you nurture yourself to this poetic world. Everytime imagining and expressing with full of zest and co relating with the natural world. You rock sumya..
    🙂

    • soumyav October 29, 2012 / 12:48 pm

      Thank you Shiv for complementing my words and thoughts with your praises. Iam very happy that my work touches you.

  11. Sharmishtha October 29, 2012 / 3:04 pm

    this is just fabulous soumyav. the yearning and the way of expressing it.

    • soumyav October 29, 2012 / 7:20 pm

      Thank you Sharmishtha!

  12. ☮♥☆ October 29, 2012 / 10:42 pm

    what a lucky man 🙂
    he, he
    nice,

  13. pirate0toujours October 29, 2012 / 11:53 pm

    You play with nature, and play with our nature! And you show tenderness for nature, and tender feelings for him. Beautiful poem.

    • soumyav October 30, 2012 / 9:45 am

      Thank you so much! that was a nice way of expressing!

  14. drsuraiyanasim October 30, 2012 / 11:50 am

    Too lovely for mere words…..my dictionary doesn’t hold any.
    A longing….a wait…. The hope of return of a loved one.
    “As if the river is yet happy again to flow and unite with the ocean deep….” sigh! It’a so soothing and calm.

    • soumyav October 30, 2012 / 1:07 pm

      Even can be relevant to the wait for your return ;-)…. Iam really happy you liked it and it touched your heart.

  15. SinPSarkar October 31, 2012 / 10:45 am

    It’s beautiful! The river is always happy to unite with the ocean! And knnow not how long it travels before finally falling into his arms, losing itself! All the tough deals it takes up in the journey is lost and forgotten the moment it unites! Loved to re-read it:)

    • soumyav October 31, 2012 / 10:47 am

      Thank you for liking this.

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