OUR SONG


 

 

 

 

 

 

A song that we loved to sing,

together in the days of spring,

with swinging flowers blooming,

and streams of the river flowing…

 

Music of which you composed,

I wrote the lyrics foretold,

together we hummed in a tune,

melodies of which can never get old…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hours of  patience, heaps of love,

compiled in a sweetest song  ever,

touch of intense emotions to cry,

infinite moments when we lived and died…

 

Euphonic sounds, echoing in the nature,

dispersing in the saffron coloured atmosphere,

shrilling notes of the strings we can hear,

resounding in the forest sprawling near…

 

Eternal song of our adore,

sung together on earth , 

reverberates throughout the cosmos…

flowing with incessant splendour!

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41 thoughts on “OUR SONG

  1. Esenga' s Voice October 24, 2012 / 12:33 pm

    Wonderful! So warm, positive and inspiring are the notes in your song, my friend.

    • soumyav October 24, 2012 / 12:49 pm

      Oh! thank you so much for liking the melody!

  2. Nirmal Bajwa October 24, 2012 / 2:08 pm

    beautiful, eternal song of life goes on playing.

    • soumyav October 24, 2012 / 2:09 pm

      Thank you Nirmal!

      • Nirmal Bajwa October 24, 2012 / 2:11 pm

        u r welcome, keep writting. your reader wait for the next one.

  3. Sharmishtha Basu October 24, 2012 / 2:27 pm

    these are immortal songs! songs that will never ebb away.

  4. meholysmile October 24, 2012 / 3:14 pm

    feel like I am hearing you singing…beautiful!

    • soumyav October 25, 2012 / 10:57 pm

      Thank you so much!

    • soumyav October 25, 2012 / 10:49 pm

      Thank you and very much same to you!

  5. elamany October 24, 2012 / 6:10 pm

    song of love … singing birds how shiny you draw a melody … thanks Soumaya

    • soumyav October 25, 2012 / 10:48 pm

      Singing birds always bring joy and their melody is always cherished..so liked their pic…

      • elamany October 26, 2012 / 10:20 pm

        terrific and fabulous as usual

  6. Raunak October 24, 2012 / 9:05 pm

    no comments 😀

    • soumyav October 25, 2012 / 10:57 pm

      🙂 🙂 your presence speaks itself!

  7. Mira Jay October 24, 2012 / 9:42 pm

    Melodies of life-seasons fuse singing eternity…

    Love & Light

    • soumyav October 25, 2012 / 10:47 pm

      beautifully said MIra!

  8. artzent October 25, 2012 / 1:39 am

    A light uplifting poem beautifully written as always! Kudos my friend!

    • soumyav October 25, 2012 / 10:46 pm

      THank you so much June! Iam really happy you liked it!

  9. nightlake October 25, 2012 / 6:26 am

    a lovely song:) and also liked the photo of a rose on the notes

    • soumyav October 25, 2012 / 10:07 am

      Thank you so much!

  10. DataDiary October 26, 2012 / 9:28 am

    Heart touching song,,….i lv u…..

    • soumyav October 27, 2012 / 2:56 pm

      Thank you for visiting here and loving it!

  11. pirate0toujours October 28, 2012 / 12:20 pm

    Love is always such a rich feeling on your pages, and I always like nature’s presence and role throughout your verses. Therapeutic!

    • soumyav October 28, 2012 / 2:26 pm

      Thank you so much for saying that! its a beautiful compliment for my verse.

  12. Rahul Ranjan October 28, 2012 / 1:04 pm

    Beautiful poem for love birds. Really wonderful things to notice, one sings a song and the other has the lyrics. Souls connected. Lovely poem !

    • soumyav October 28, 2012 / 2:19 pm

      Thank you Rahul for going thru this and getting th feel very truly..

  13. Rahul Ranjan October 28, 2012 / 1:21 pm

    Really love your love poems. I enjoy reading them. Have gone through your many poems but love poems are really better written.

    • soumyav October 28, 2012 / 2:21 pm

      Thank s alot Rahul for reading those many! and loving them.. AS for the love poems you try to find your reflection in them, so you get well connected…

  14. drsuraiyanasim October 30, 2012 / 1:45 pm

    This is so lyrical….like a song….and i almost sung it. Mesmerising and beautiful….

    • soumyav October 30, 2012 / 1:47 pm

      Thank you Suri! hope my words brought a smile on your face..

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