Mysterious dark night  brightened in moon-lite,

ardent atmosphere soaking the spirit of love,

your phrases wooing with grandeur,

I remain calm with all my fervor…


Journey of space between traversed,

within few minutes of  getting accustomed,

soliciting expressions  made verbal,

you asking for explicit behaviour!


I stop and pause this moment here,

For this isn’t the path I admired,

mute and speechless I remain,

my blushes are the ones I cannot tame!


What loving and zealous the brightness feels,

still somewhere within my heart weeps,

Alas! ablaze is the flare …

burning within…

Hoping and desiring

for a momentous begin…







35 thoughts on “ABLAZE

  1. SinPSarkar October 22, 2012 / 3:42 pm

    Beautiful! Missed out many posts, I know! Have been doing busy with all the Pooja and Performances! Will catch up the roll soon! And this was simply beautiful! Enough to make it felt!🙂

    • soumyav October 22, 2012 / 7:36 pm

      Thank you Pankaj to catch up here! hope your progs are going great and rocking! iam happy you liked it

  2. neongreenmilk October 22, 2012 / 5:03 pm

    great blog! happy to check it out!

    • soumyav October 22, 2012 / 7:35 pm

      Thank you dear! shall visit yours soon.

  3. Tatsat October 22, 2012 / 5:39 pm

    I am given to understand that readers’ perception of any writeup is coloured by their state of mind and not so much as what the writer is trying to say. So it might just be me, but it fits well for one of my friends who is having a terrible marriage.
    Amazing play of words !

    • soumyav October 22, 2012 / 7:34 pm

      Thank you Tatsat for reading and going through this.Yes mostly it depends on the reader how and what perception he carries for the words.The same set of words may have different meaning for another..as for me Iam glad you could co relate to something form this.

    • soumyav October 22, 2012 / 7:32 pm

      Thank you sharmishtha!

      • Sharmishtha October 23, 2012 / 8:53 am

        you make romance sound like music🙂

        • soumyav October 23, 2012 / 9:47 am

          🙂 Thank you… it is music anyway ..just playing inside our hearts..

  4. Raunak October 22, 2012 / 8:39 pm

    i’m speechless!

    • soumyav October 23, 2012 / 10:09 am

      🙂 Thts a great compliment for me!

    • soumyav October 22, 2012 / 10:22 pm

      sometimes thoughts are scandalous !

    • soumyav October 22, 2012 / 10:22 pm

      sometimes thoughts are scandalous !

  5. Pawan Hira October 22, 2012 / 10:00 pm

    It is a moment well captured, and I can see you alive. It is in surrender to the love, you chance upon beautiful things in life. This sudden moment of light, I love. Your journey is beautiful, Soumya.🙂

    • soumyav October 22, 2012 / 10:24 pm

      Thank you Pawan for getting the real essence.. . tough though …it is the moment..,that speaks of itself..

  6. Nirmal Bajwa October 22, 2012 / 10:45 pm

    nice poem, enjoy the state of dualities. its a bliss.

  7. Mira Jay October 23, 2012 / 1:21 am

    Don’t know why I’ve seen a heart-torn-page behind this:( may it all be well
    &by the way tame not your blush; “Blushing is the color of virtue”…

    Peace & Light

    • soumyav October 23, 2012 / 9:51 am

      Thank you Mira for seeing the page behind..Just a momentary one…Impulsive one rather.Guess we all go thru such instances sometime… and yes by the time Iam replying you back..al becomes fine again!

  8. Sharmishtha October 24, 2012 / 10:19 am

    i believe in your concluding words- i dont think there are two souls that are each other’s clone.🙂 we become friends, lasting friends with compatible souls not our clones i guess…

    • Sharmishtha October 24, 2012 / 10:20 am

      wrong number, it was for the new post🙂

      • soumyav October 24, 2012 / 10:25 am

        Now Iam getting accustomed to your style of commenting!;-)

        • Sharmishtha October 24, 2012 / 10:36 am

          hee hee🙂
          i copy pasted the comment in appropriate place this time.

    • soumyav October 24, 2012 / 10:22 am

      very true dear! well caught 🙂 the words..

  9. Insight October 25, 2012 / 6:23 pm

    Mind-blowing one, Soumyaji!🙂


  10. Wendell A. Brown October 26, 2012 / 1:51 pm

    Mesmerizing image and words! Your heart’s words shine through so radiantly!

    • soumyav October 26, 2012 / 11:54 pm

      Thank you so much WEndell! its an honour and blessing when the words affect you.

  11. pirate0toujours October 28, 2012 / 12:35 pm

    My screen was actually smoking by the time I finished reading! Intense passion not just smouldering, but more, yet still she weeps – emotions against desire

    • soumyav October 28, 2012 / 2:19 pm

      Iam really happy you liked the post and could feel the passion and the emotions. Thanks..

  12. drsuraiyanasim October 30, 2012 / 1:58 pm

    A shy heart and the wait for the momentous time to let passions flare……very romantic.

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