An unearthed earth of undulating  emotions,

lay amidst the various stratospheres,

undiscovered, unexplored land of ardor,

barren in form devoid of sprinkled  adorn…



Peasants of different genre approached,

with their skills being intellectuals,

none could assess the nature and depth,

To sow a seed of trust and faith…



The dried land awaited ,

the one who could toil and moil,

for  the ultimate layer of  gravel,

When Blithe shall the bestowed one bloom on it….



The realm in the persevered  way,

Longs for the greenery ,

That would  embellish ,beautify …

as bedecked jewels on its surface,

spreading  within the sense of  erubescence  of  quintessence…



14 thoughts on “UNEARTHED EARTH

  1. yepirategunn October 17, 2012 / 2:16 pm

    I just love your passion for nature, and how you show so much through the imagery of nature – making your poetry have 2, 3 sometimes more layers. Love it.

    • soumyav October 17, 2012 / 2:24 pm

      Thank you so much for saying those wonderful words . Its the passion that brings out anything in different layers and also keeps the urge alive to discover more.

  2. Nirmal Bajwa October 17, 2012 / 3:29 pm

    nice one, the real journey is journey inwards and explore the self. the land there is unexplored and fertile.

    • soumyav October 17, 2012 / 3:33 pm

      Thanks Nirmal for seeing thru.

  3. dba October 17, 2012 / 3:50 pm

    Very nice one Great post.. Appreciate your thoughts..

  4. Raunak October 17, 2012 / 5:40 pm

    I love the metaphorical depiction. Beautiful!

    • soumyav October 17, 2012 / 5:52 pm

      Iam glad you liked it 🙂 thanks.

    • soumyav October 17, 2012 / 10:02 pm

      🙂 Thank you Sharmishtha1

  5. nightlake October 18, 2012 / 5:19 am

    This was so beautiful, Soumya:) and I like the title too:)

  6. Wendell A. Brown October 18, 2012 / 6:37 am

    Your heart has been blessed with such spiritual insight…that is another beautiful gift you have. The words of your post will soothe but also make minds think a few moments…they will do that in hopes of understanding their wisdom! Wonderful poem my sister!

    • soumyav October 18, 2012 / 9:41 am

      It really means and values a lot Wendell when you comment on any poem.I really look forward to your view regarding my work when something like this has been posted. Thank you for blessing me with your depth and words.I feel overwhelmed when anyone gets the real essence of it.

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