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Post a mail of few words,
parceled well and tucked,
scrambled or jumbled,
scanty ,few but not one…
Put them all in an envelope,
even if not pasted or written ,
in form of cuttings
or pictures that resemble…
I shall make a world,
using those meagre ones,
along with my imagination,
I can weave a story or a poem at once…
Words simple or solitary
send them across,
which are closer to you,
or considered meaningless often…
For it has been a long time,
since I held them close,
absorbing the nostalgic scent,
which the paper had absorbed…
While you close the envelope,
put some air of your feel,
a touch of tender care,
and a kiss that I missed…
My treasure has emptied,
And I wait for the precious post to arrive,
To refill my casket of thoughts,
to build castles of words in my life…
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Lovely expression….immensely like the way the words express the yearning to hear from that special one! Refreshing!
Thank you Amit!
I shall make a world,
using those meagre ones,
along with my imagination,
I can weave a story or a poem at once…===
This is awesome! Thank you for sharing! 🙂
Subhan Zein
welcome for your appreciation and glad that you liked Subhan Zein
…waiting for the precious post to arrive….
Reminds me of blogging…lol!
😉
Thank you dear for liking !
lovely.
Thank you
no more hats to put off 🙂
🙂 thank you dear!
Nice one..
Thanks for being here!
this is priceless soumyav. very very memory stirring.
Thank you Sharmishtha!
Incredibly written!! Brings so many hidden emotions to surface!
Thank you Sakshi for reading and liking this!
Thank you Sakshi for reading and liking this!
A masterpiece, dear! We can do so much with one word…yes, “make the world”. If only we realized more often how much power it carries. I enjoyed!
Thank you so much dear! you always add a touch of more grace with your comment
different imagination! like this one:)
Thank you so much!
This is one of my favourite themes – the whole concept from beginning to end. Very well handled, with suspense and words that hit, voices shouting, all in the poem. Really well-crafted. A real social voice.
Thank you for your appreciation and liking the words.
Ohhh…My comment was for Inhumane..am reading Words now…Sorry for the mistake….
its ok..I guessed that… as I read your comment!
Your soft words leave me breathless, and almost speechless for a moment. I am blessed to have tasted of a timeless treasure to be. Your words always find their intended mark, leaving minds dizzy with joy and envy…for your poem, which is so much an inside image of your heart oozes with delightful perfection. Your poem is a lovely jewel my sister. Thanks for bringing your smile to fill my day Soumyav!
Iam really touched with your special words… the way you express your experience while going thru my poems makes me feel blessed.Thank you Wendell for all the love and affection.
Highly profound expressions! 🙂
Rahul
Thank you! 🙂
You’re most welcome, Soumyaji! 🙂
Rahul