WHO WAS THAT?


Minutes before the show ended,a shadow moved out rapidly ,

before anyone could notice, it sneaked through the side exit,

It was dark everywhere, stumbling on something,

the creepy one said'” Oh! I am sorry”,

the victim of the squashed feet,

replied,”What makes you so hurry “?

“Leaving the climax in the middle,

are you getting hungry?”

****

Even before the mysteries unfold,

whilst the crowd is enjoying more,

what makes this crawly creature go?

The one who was seated along the rear corner,

thought and gasped for a moment,

Is he a terrorist who vanished in the middle?

****

Hurriedly he moved out,

asking the security to check the silhouette.

Moments later the personnel came,

nothing in particular,”You are safe”,they said…

The man could not believe them

as the shadow had disappeared at once,

He tried to call the police cell,

contacting the main people of the multiplex,

Everyone reached the panicked stricken man,

calming him as much as they can…

****

Ultimately things got revealed,

that the silhouette was not a terrorist,

He was a well-known star of the movie whose premiere was being exhibited,

he had sneaked in between,

to watch the reaction of his audience ,

watching  his critically played character on-screen…

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31 thoughts on “WHO WAS THAT?

  1. Asha Seth October 5, 2012 / 7:54 am

    That was brilliant piece of imagination Soumya. You really got a knack for it. Lovely post. 🙂

    -Asha

    • soumyav October 5, 2012 / 8:03 am

      Thanks Asha! it was just a silly thought which gt the form of words. 🙂

      • Asha Seth October 5, 2012 / 8:05 am

        Silly you call it?? Oh no, no, no! They are just perfect and I could imagine myself sitting there and feeling all of it. As though I was the one who asked, “WHO WAS THAT?” 😉

        -Asha

        • soumyav October 5, 2012 / 8:16 am

          thts so sweet of you! 🙂 to get into the place right there with the mood..

  2. Personal Concerns October 5, 2012 / 8:19 am

    this was so nice a narration. and there is a coincidence too. only a few days ago was I watching the classic all about eve which is so much about a star of the yester years!

    quite liked this post Soumya!

    • soumyav October 5, 2012 / 8:22 am

      Thanks Amit! Glad it was a good co incidence… and you liked! am lucky! 🙂 🙂

  3. Sharmishtha Basu October 5, 2012 / 8:33 am

    this one is amazing soumyav! what an imagination and its so apt! 🙂

    poor fellows their movie got screwed up!

    • soumyav October 5, 2012 / 9:54 am

      Thanks Sharmishtha! u always encourage my weird imaginations! 🙂

      • Sharmishtha Basu October 7, 2012 / 10:00 am

        well, because i love to read them and wish that i had that talent! my works are fully gathered from life- monotonous – but when it comes to reading i love to read talented people most.

        • soumyav October 7, 2012 / 10:10 am

          Oh! thts such a wonderful compliment for me! gues Iam getting flattered.. 🙂 BUt your works reflect the reality of life .. a true mirror of whts gng around..

          • Sharmishtha Basu October 7, 2012 / 10:13 am

            i love your poems very much- you may not be aware but they have a depth, beauty and very often a deep wisdom in them.

            glad that you found me, i love reading good poems/stories so much!

            • soumyav October 7, 2012 / 10:17 am

              Thanks a lot Sharmishtha! often my poems are the ones reflecting my experiences and the times that I h been thru and the life that I have seen … even the simplest one carries something which I have experienced as a person..

  4. Tapish Gupta October 5, 2012 / 10:34 am

    Oh my, that was amazing. You can really pen down a poem on anything, that too beautifully and brilliantly!
    You’ve got an awesome imagination 🙂

    • soumyav October 5, 2012 / 1:55 pm

      Thanks a lot Tapish for liking the imagination and the words. 🙂

  5. meholysmile October 5, 2012 / 8:23 pm

    That was truly hilarious…brilliant.

    • soumyav October 5, 2012 / 11:37 pm

      no ! 🙂 just a piece of imagination,coz they check like hell when we go inside the multiplex.few years back we wernt supposed to leave the hall in the middle too in mumbai.

  6. Pragati October 6, 2012 / 2:21 pm

    WOW !!! What an imagination…. and great skill to pen down it so well.. Interesting !!!

    • soumyav October 6, 2012 / 2:24 pm

      Thanks Pragati for loving the imagination and the words. Iam happy u enjoyed! 🙂

      • Pragati October 6, 2012 / 2:25 pm

        Keep Inspiring 🙂

  7. SinPSarkar October 6, 2012 / 5:59 pm

    Great piece of suspense poetry! 🙂

  8. drsuraiyanasim October 7, 2012 / 2:25 am

    I guess this happens….doesn’t it?
    Very imaginative and creative…..i enjoyed the mystery!

    • soumyav October 7, 2012 / 9:46 am

      🙂 :-)..thank you.

  9. Insight October 7, 2012 / 1:43 pm

    Nicely written, sissaji! \m/ 😀

    Rahul

    • soumyav October 7, 2012 / 1:43 pm

      thank you Rahul! 🙂

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