THE CHARISMA


The magnetism of your charisma,
attracted my life force,
beholding a wish in the eyes,
I stargazed …
 
 
Undefiled thoughts rained,
drenching me for a while,
intoxicating  fragrances of dreams,
I emitted…
 
 
Splendour feelings shined,
as drops of precious gems,
sparkling stars all over me,
I bedecked…
 
 
Plunged and engrossed in the illusion,
Doused were the emotions,
dehydrated I became…
As I woke up…
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24 thoughts on “THE CHARISMA

    • soumyav October 1, 2012 / 10:45 am

      Thank you dear ! 🙂 thanks for liking

  1. LAND OF FUN October 1, 2012 / 11:21 am

    I like it to.
    Have any experience on tumblr?

    • soumyav October 1, 2012 / 11:31 am

      not much..just opened an account few days back..doesn’t seem as interesting as WP

      • LAND OF FUN October 1, 2012 / 11:34 am

        yes- you are so right, I have one there too, plz start blogging there, we can submit posts to our both blogs, yours and mine.so…??? may I know the url?
        wordpress is really wonderful, I love this

        • soumyav October 1, 2012 / 11:36 am

          i have connected my tumbler account to the WP ..so it gets publicized.
          will let u know.

          • LAND OF FUN October 1, 2012 / 11:37 am

            Yeah…That’s the main reason to create account there…Hahaha….Thanks !

  2. Raunak October 1, 2012 / 12:42 pm

    beautiful description of the nature of your feelings.Would love to know the wish, the feelings and dreams themselves 🙂

    • soumyav October 1, 2012 / 12:56 pm

      Thanks Raunak for loving it.The wish ,feelings and dreams are always unlimited 🙂 ,endless so they stay as long as we live..

  3. momentswithmillie October 1, 2012 / 3:15 pm

    Lovely.

    • soumyav October 1, 2012 / 5:07 pm

      Thanks for that Millie!

  4. meholysmile October 1, 2012 / 5:45 pm

    So beautiful…the words of yours…It seems like forming lyrics with imaginative tune…

    • soumyav October 2, 2012 / 10:25 am

      Thanks dear for liking it!

  5. Midnighthues October 2, 2012 / 9:36 am

    Mesmerizingly ethereal ….

    • soumyav October 2, 2012 / 10:17 am

      🙂 🙂 love the compliment!

  6. elamany October 2, 2012 / 11:21 am

    beautiful poem ,,, but who is him in (your charisma) >>> first line

    • soumyav October 2, 2012 / 2:23 pm

      Ha ha! great question! Its a dream Amany! see the last line! 😉

  7. nightlake October 2, 2012 / 5:22 pm

    lovely..especially the last 4 lines

  8. Waywardspirit October 3, 2012 / 9:51 am

    Now, I see charisma as sparkles and gems. My experience of people and being drawn in or of drawing in by offering jewels. : ) Dehydrated, yes, a love hangover.

    • soumyav October 3, 2012 / 9:56 am

      Thanks dear for going thru this and liking it! 🙂

  9. drsuraiyanasim October 3, 2012 / 2:18 pm

    Simply gorgeuous and enchanting…”Drops of precious gems..” Loved the dream….it was intoxicating.

    • soumyav October 3, 2012 / 2:28 pm

      :-):-) i am happier coz u like it so much

      • drsuraiyanasim October 3, 2012 / 2:30 pm

        🙂

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