Turbulence inside the deepest core of mine,
aggravated liquid churns  and  overboils,
the suffocating emotions release in form of steam,
eradicating the sense of being a human being…
A large vent within the shell,
finds its way to ventilate ,
the molten lava of feelings ,
overflowing out without inhibitions…
Dark smoke covers the clouds,
dense fumes become smog,
poisoning the atmosphere,
 when a volcanic eruption is caused…
Crater of hollowness is formed,
after outpouring every venom,
the volcano  remains dormant now,
till the nature again errors

15 thoughts on “A VOLCANO

  1. Rishabh Upadhyay September 23, 2012 / 12:21 pm

    you know what was coming to my sights when i was reading this. . Don’t know why but it was the NATRAJ or what ever we call him. . One with a very big mask and crown. . 🙂 very expressive and loud. .

    • soumyav September 23, 2012 / 12:54 pm

      Thanks for your wonderful imaginative share! 🙂

  2. elamany September 23, 2012 / 6:24 pm

    the human soul ….
    ups and down …. but never calm
    beautiful reflections and imaging … as usual

    • soumyav September 23, 2012 / 10:06 pm

      Thank you for liking it!

  3. SinPSarkar September 24, 2012 / 11:48 pm

    Loved the stanza
    “Dark smoke covers the clouds,
    dense fumes become smog,
    poisoning the atmosphere,
    when a volcanic eruption is caused…”

    Tells a lot of an outburst..an outrage…an anger!
    Beautifully put! 🙂

    • soumyav September 24, 2012 / 11:52 pm

      Very truly read Pankaj! a human mind and heart when fumes..causes a volcano.

  4. drsuraiyanasim September 25, 2012 / 7:57 pm

    I will take this more in a metaphorical sense……and it’s lush in description and rich in fury. Exquisitely expressed dear.

    • soumyav September 25, 2012 / 10:13 pm

      Thanks dear .. for loving it!

    • soumyav October 13, 2012 / 3:40 pm

      Thank you so much

  5. yerpirate December 8, 2012 / 5:40 pm

    The sudden poison, pollution..yes, after the dramatic, savage beauty of the erruption..

    • soumyav December 8, 2012 / 7:08 pm

      Hmm! the volcano is all about it! always!

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