As I pat on his back in the early hours of the morn,

he turns around and grins “let me sleep for few more minutes,Mom”…

“Few minutes wnt make you fresh ,but you will miss the bus instead,

life never waits  for  you,value the minutes before they rule you…”  ,as I  scream.

grumbling and irritating he gets up stamping his feet.


As he  freshens up,running hastily here and there,

I pack of his tiffin,ensuring he carries himself with care,

hurriedly he leaves to catch the bus for the  school ,

this is the little  boy of mine, now stepping in the teen’s shoes…


The teenagers of today live in a world of  imaginations,

forgetting the rest around,engrossed in their games activation,

PSP,PS2 every day the name and game changes through,

computer is a toy for them, Tablet , I- pad are  their  ardent truth…


Inquisitiveness rules their mind, confused they get on every hour and every mile,

Parents nag to the core is what they all think,

Advising  them now becomes more elegant and serene,

criticizing a point can create havoc at homes…

So better you all watch out… if you have teens at home!


Still I do love my sweet little boy,

Just stepping into the teens and being a darling guy!

Unlike the others he is too matured,

despite  irritating me and putting me on nerves…

but l he is a wonder boy of mine,

adjusting to every surrounding,

even when we shift places in no time…


God bless the innocence that he possesses,

May all the dreams he perceive

 get achieved in future

Just a wish I carry  while he grows up…

That he  remains  humble and sincere to  his  conscience…


38 thoughts on “JUST STEPPED !

  1. Pieces September 20, 2012 / 11:41 am

    That’s really a sweet poem. May he makes true all your hopes 🙂

  2. Hitesh Patel September 20, 2012 / 12:06 pm

    Wow… thats so beautiful and sweet 🙂

    • soumyav September 20, 2012 / 1:16 pm

      Thanks Hitesh for visiting and liking! 🙂

  3. Archana September 20, 2012 / 12:38 pm

    *hugs to the mother*

    • soumyav September 20, 2012 / 1:17 pm

      🙂 🙂 thanks Archana!

  4. pseudomonaz September 20, 2012 / 12:45 pm

    very sweet….:-)

  5. aquaturtleme September 20, 2012 / 1:07 pm

    they r pampered, always getting attention & rather too dependent on moms, this makes them all the more sensitive, but they’re more mature than v imagine…. very true, Soumya… experiencing the same sitn wid my 9-yr old daughter…. in many lines u’ve said out wot i’m xperiencing….

    • soumyav September 20, 2012 / 1:18 pm

      welcome Rose! thanks for sharing my thoughts as yours ..as well

  6. myindividualinsights September 20, 2012 / 2:13 pm

    Just leave him through the way he likes and don’t go for frequent unnecessary restrictions in front of him! This is a common TREND behind the SUCCESS of our present generation tagged buds. He looks so great and mature too.\m/ 🙂


    • soumyav September 20, 2012 / 2:15 pm

      Thanks Rahul for your great 🙂 advice! shall try to..still its hard for me to keep my mouth shut at times… 😉

      • myindividualinsights September 20, 2012 / 2:21 pm

        LOL! Sorry, I’m with your boy, Soumyaji. Please do avoid such kind of unnecessary behaviors towards him. 😀 🙂


  7. Personal Concerns September 20, 2012 / 3:22 pm

    From my side too- smiles, a little pat on his back and a lot of best wishes for his bright future!

    • soumyav September 20, 2012 / 3:26 pm

      Thank you so much for the wishes! he is amused by seeing the post ..didnt know about it untill he saw it now..after coming back from school. 🙂

  8. Prashant September 20, 2012 / 6:04 pm

    ahhh…kids grow so fast…yet another life to live in them !

  9. ☮♥☆ September 20, 2012 / 8:13 pm

    hope for the same…
    God bless. 🙂

    • soumyav September 20, 2012 / 8:38 pm

      Thanks a lot for the wishes!

  10. drsuraiyanasim September 21, 2012 / 2:41 am

    Awwww…such a sweet and amusing poem. 🙂
    Every word you wrote about today’s kids rings so true.
    May he grow up to be a kind, sweet and humble gentleman (which i am sure he will….for he has such a sweet mom. 🙂 )

    • soumyav September 21, 2012 / 2:47 pm

      Tht is so sweet of you to think and wish! you always flatter me with so many compliments! 🙂

      • drsuraiyanasim September 21, 2012 / 3:03 pm

        You deserve them all…!!!!

  11. elamany September 21, 2012 / 11:10 am

    I wish all his dreams and YOUrs come true.
    You seem a perfect and sentimental mother. I loved every single letter.
    Bless YOUr family.
    Lot of greetings.

    • soumyav September 21, 2012 / 2:32 pm

      Thats so nice of you to wish and pray for! Thanks for everything !

  12. SinPSarkar September 21, 2012 / 4:55 pm

    Gosh! My Mumma also tells me the tales of my childhood and I feel amazed how times have changed and how did I!
    Lovely Read!
    Takes me back to childhood! 🙂
    And lucky him to get a poem from his Mom! 🙂

    • soumyav September 21, 2012 / 11:16 pm

      Thts wonderful that you could flashback to your teens too wth thi spost..thanks for liking it!

  13. Sindhiya October 4, 2012 / 6:32 pm

    It was awesome poem…! beautifully penned 🙂 i am just like that too 🙂
    the early morning rise…..n they way my parents care for me..! Kudos 🙂

    • soumyav October 5, 2012 / 12:58 am

      Thank you so much for liking…and seems u covered my whole blog in a day! 🙂

      • Sindhiya October 5, 2012 / 5:00 am

        It was awesome…….. and i could not stop reading them 🙂 it was too beautiful not to read… 🙂

        • soumyav October 5, 2012 / 7:30 am

          Thank you so much ! 🙂 🙂

          • Sindhiya October 5, 2012 / 9:24 pm

            It’s my pleasure 🙂 🙂

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