The hours seem like light years,

While waiting for your arrival,

thoughts get submerged in your intellections,

the await goes longer than presumed…

Faraway in the mountains,

you have your own world,

shaped by your persistance,

warmth by your love…

Hither , I sit and prong,

on construed desires,


stings of anguished fire…

Seasons change ,

wintery winds blow again,

Sitting beside the frozen stream,

I get frigid


become a glacier once again…


24 thoughts on “A GLACIER

    1. Thanks a lot for the appreciation and to be a critic too! Well! I know its a measure of distance :-)…and I tried to signify it here by implying an invariably infinite distance ,which cannot be covered in a limited amount of time…so I used! anyways thanks for letting me know what you felt! 🙂

  1. It has become a habit for me to draw a metaphor of your poetry with love! Here as well I see someone awaiting his/her love from a farthest hemisphere…And when everything changes…the realization strikes and he know…wait is all he has got(Become glacier) 🙂
    Loved it!

  2. drsuraiyanasim

    This is touching and deep…
    “I get frigid and become a glacier once again”….loved this line so much as i could imagine the freezing of oneself with longing….too lovely for words.

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