Where hath thou vanished from the thoughts,
everything is the same even the dew drops,
Confined why art thou seeing my side,
Are thou getting conscious or sublime?
whatever rationality thou possesses!
My soul will always believe for ages,
An enduring relief for the excruciating pain,
Is instilled in my heart with rays of faith…
Show the magnetic presence ! my thou friend!
without whom! the world is dead!
What a beautiful poem! Enlightening!
With love,
-Naima.
Thanks Naima! 🙂 🙂
You’re always welcome!! 🙂
-Naima.
Its beautiful!
Thank you Neeraj!
beautiful as usual
thank you 🙂
lovely poem. 🙂
Thanks a lot! 🙂
Lovely ode to a friend and i absolutely love the first two lines.
Thanks dear!
sometimes we have to hold our friend’s hand and tug him back to life, like you have tried in this poem. loved it.
True! Sharmishtha!
and thats what true friends are for i believe 🙂
Yes dear! 🙂
this “thou” is not the third person it seems !
this “thou” seems to be the personification of something very strong and pious !
Best of luck girl ! 🙂
Thank you dear! 🙂
Loved the way of expressing the geeling of missing that special friend! 🙂
🙂 I think it suits u r mood well!
Yeah! Very true! 🙂
….driven by pureness, you carry a light with emotions of joy spirit. Phrased finely with your continuous glowing heart. 🙂
Thanks Pawan ! 🙂
Awesome words as always!
Thanks June!
An ode to a dear; nicely plotted…& I agree with your closing couplet; true friends do make our world’s beat go on….
Peaceful weekend
Thanks Mira for ur lovely comment! a happy weekend to u too! 🙂
nice… 🙂
Thanks Vimal! 🙂