ON THE PATH


Iam lost…

Mixed thoughts wandering ,

instigating various feelings,

stirring emotions within..

On the deserted path of living…

I choose…

Different paths of strive,

steering the directions of life,

One guiding through the course,

another a terrain of  hard contours…

I walk…

 Determination in thoughts,

diligence in actions,

persevere with tenacity,

attempting again after  failure… 

smiling to get through the faction…

I arose…

Inculcated faith,

with the help of strength,

instilling confidence,

with utmost reverence…

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16 thoughts on “ON THE PATH

    • soumyav August 30, 2012 / 10:39 am

      Thanks NIrmal! Iam happy it touched you.

  1. Wendell A. Brown August 29, 2012 / 10:54 pm

    i read your poem several times my sister! I see your smile in every word written! For the truth reigns delightfully in each word shared. They permeated deep into my spirit and as I embrace them, i can only say your writings always get better like a priceless aged wine or a oil painting by Rembrandt or Picasso. Your words have a certain rythmn that always seems to be better than the day before. I loved your poem, thanks for sharing the blessing of your Heart’s thoughts!

    • soumyav August 30, 2012 / 10:40 am

      Thank you so much Wendell! your affectionate words do encourage me to write more and the compliment by you shall always be treasured

  2. elamany August 30, 2012 / 12:26 am

    this brings self confidence ,, i salute ur ideas ,, u r innovative not in poeting but also in choosing different ideas,, thank u for everything u write and share

    • soumyav August 30, 2012 / 9:47 am

      Iam glad u like the topics as well as the poems..

  3. SinPSarkar August 31, 2012 / 2:51 am

    Loved the stanza:
    I walk…

    Determination in thoughts,

    diligence in actions,

    persevere with tenacity,

    attempting again after failure…

    smiling to get through the faction…

    A great piece of inspiring art for a man in a path! 🙂

    • soumyav August 31, 2012 / 11:33 am

      Thanks thts the way we move on in life… 🙂

  4. suraiyadrsuraiyanasim August 31, 2012 / 1:16 pm

    I felt my heart’s echoes in the 1st stanza….and the last stanza is very inspiring. I enjoyed reading this so much!

    • soumyav August 31, 2012 / 9:50 pm

      I am happy it could inspire anyone! 🙂

  5. boomiebol September 5, 2012 / 1:19 am

    This feels very powerful…very nice!

    • soumyav September 5, 2012 / 10:45 am

      Thanks a lot dear!

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