Someone just started a journey on a new road,

away from the pleasures in the arms of real chores,

with courage in the words and the depth of feelings,

undertaking the real path enlightening the beings…


gruesome shocking dreadful facts of life,

macabre of shameful acts covered by political measures,

audacity in mind and a will to mark the valor,

stimulate the dead souls to begin a new world…


initiatated as an individual effort,

may everybody together join the deed with zest,

resulting in a zealous endeavour,

eradicating the immoral appalling from this world…




7 thoughts on “A NEW EFFORT

  1. Prashant July 18, 2012 / 11:19 pm

    wish endeavors may last stronger than the times….as good friends and dear companions are lost !

    • soumyav July 18, 2012 / 11:22 pm

      true ones are never lost…they just play their role and step aside to let the endeavour continue with sincerity.

  2. Prashant July 19, 2012 / 12:03 am

    if stepping aside needed more courage than being together ! Not in this world lady. Endeavors alone don’t play the change !

    • soumyav July 19, 2012 / 12:34 pm

      I agree! to be together on any mission is more courageous for it requires patience and determination,alongwith compassion.

  3. SinPSarkar July 20, 2012 / 11:52 pm

    I liked the framing of words to tell how much a person faces when trying to start a journey, a journey for something where everything and almost everyone is following a tenet!
    Lovely and bold!

    • soumyav July 21, 2012 / 8:57 pm

      Thanks pankaj! it indeed requires courage to start a new journey different from others.

      • SinPSarkar July 22, 2012 / 12:44 am

        True! And truly put up in the Poem!:)

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