Based on a true life incident , when I was just 12.This experience instilled in me the sense of devotion and explained the meaning of total surrender…

Miles away a flame flickers on the verge of getting smothered,

two innocent lives run helter skelter to try their luck,

A strange night for everyone,  a challenge of faith so arduous,

a small negligence could take a life for ever…


Helpless still calm,remained the innocents,

unaware  of all ,was the light of this existence,

deeply engrossed in accomplishing a task,

far off oblivious of the tense situation overall…


A messenger carried  the last message,

the pure childlike hearts feared the absence,

hearing the last call from the kin,

the mighty word got worried…

time had flown like the wind,

Was it already late or had he some time left for the scene?

Bowed before to get the permission,

he waited for the Supreme to nod his appraisal,

Astonished he got the reply,

to complete the task without fearing the outcome!


Intense faith with a gigantic  determination ,

Courage unlimited to stay back in such fervour,

Grace of god and words from HIM,

were the only blessings that he could get in….

Week later when he arrived,

having the mixed emotions inside,

knowing not what was there lying ,

in the garden of his life…


Lo! He found,

The innocent minds playing giggling with their smiles,

light of his life was still burning,

with a small flame ,but intensifying…

Needless to say any words,

the trio ran and hugged him like never,

For they had shown the faith in him,

along with the deepest devotion within…



6 thoughts on “INTENSE DEVOTION !

  1. Prashant June 30, 2012 / 11:57 am

    reminds me when I got bit by a Scaled Viper..,how I wanted only to be back with my family…for once…

    • soumyav June 30, 2012 / 12:22 pm

      That shows your courage and faith…

  2. vimal June 30, 2012 / 5:03 pm

    can you reveal what this is about?

    • soumyav June 30, 2012 / 5:15 pm

      Ya ! about an incident that happened when I was around 12. My mom got terrribly ill and almost on the verge of losing was away. me and my younger bro were the only ones there wth her. but circumstances changed suddenly in two days,like a miracle..we got to the know the truth after dad came back..

  3. Pawan Hira June 30, 2012 / 8:57 pm

    Miracles do happen when you believe it. Glad you could share a real incident. Shine on, Soumya.
    Peace and love.

    • soumyav June 30, 2012 / 9:54 pm

      Thanks Pawan! My life has encountered several miracles and I belive our devotion makes the way for them..

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