GOLDEN WORDS !


THE IDEA: The story is about two simple individuals who were once classmates and hardly interacted with each other…On the last day of their class  ,one confesses to have true admiring feelings for the other and then they  started out their journey separately only to meet years later . Each of them shining on the peak of their career . The story simply reflects how an emotion called love can change the   life  and thinking of a  weak person  forever!

The beautiful leaf from the chinar just flew down to her feet.She was walking since the last one hour without realising how far she had travelled.

Life too had been strange, a look behind  gives the glimpse of everything that she wanted to remember.

It wasn’t long since she was a young girl in her teens,like every other girl flying and bubbling with enthusiasm ,yet quiet in several matters.She was just another girl,nothing special about her that could make her desired. She was aware of that and never felt bad about it.

Schooldays were going to end soon and highschool would be great fun she had heard the conversation between her classmates.Often she was a part of everyone’s talks but never gave her opinionon anything.

One afternoon,after the class was over,an unknown friend came to her and handed her a small piece of paper rolled very nicely.Wondering what it was,she asked the girl,  ” what’s this”? The girl  just replied back , “Open and see it yourself, I don’t have any faintest idea about it.”Saying this she turned around and went back.

Confused , having a look at the paper that looked so attractive,she rolled it back to open.

Inside were few sentences written ,reading which she was astonished.

 

This is my entry for the HarperCollins–IndiBlogger Get Published contest, which is run with inputs from Yashodhara Lal and HarperCollins India.                                                                                                               

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21 thoughts on “GOLDEN WORDS !

  1. silverlining09 June 30, 2012 / 4:07 pm

    i hope there is a continuation of the story of Riona and Sam. 🙂 Looking forward to read your 201st post and beyond! More power!!!

    • soumyav June 30, 2012 / 4:10 pm

      thanks dear! shall try to take forth the story! 🙂

  2. globalunison June 30, 2012 / 4:11 pm

    I liked the twist! You described the characters too well! Anyway, this was one beautiful post by YOU! Congratulations on your 200! Soon it will be 2000, Good Luck!
    Best Wishes,
    -Naima.

    • soumyav June 30, 2012 / 4:12 pm

      Thanks Naima! loved your wishes! 🙂 🙂

  3. vimal June 30, 2012 / 5:00 pm

    lovely
    🙂
    is it based on true events?

  4. nightlake June 30, 2012 / 5:35 pm

    Hi Soumya, Congrats on your 200th post:)

  5. sheevi June 30, 2012 / 5:36 pm

    beautiful..loved it!
    would love to get more of this story.. 🙂
    and yes congrats for your 200..!

    • soumyav June 30, 2012 / 5:38 pm

      Thanks Shivi! for all the wishes! 🙂

  6. Pawan Hira June 30, 2012 / 8:50 pm

    This story should be heard. Riona seems to be promising, her character dwells a life that normal people live. Amazed with your 200th post. The start is beautiful, continue on, Soumya. 🙂

    • soumyav June 30, 2012 / 9:56 pm

      Thanks Pawan for such a compliment..

  7. dilipnaidu June 30, 2012 / 8:50 pm

    Hi Soumya,

    A facinating story indeed. And hearty congrats on your 200th.
    Happy blogging and wish you many more centuries 🙂

    Dilip

    • soumyav June 30, 2012 / 9:56 pm

      Thanks Dilip for liking the story and for ur wishes

  8. Prashant June 30, 2012 / 9:20 pm

    Connection : The beginning of an emotional copulation which yields the purity.
    Realization : The personification of life’s greatest skills and dreams into efforts.
    Authentication : When we write with the truest of urges to un-complicate life.

    Congrats for your perseverance to be YOU.

    • soumyav June 30, 2012 / 10:05 pm

      Thanks for all that!

  9. Tapish January 17, 2013 / 8:26 am

    Lovely. What’s next? 😉
    it seems inspired from a true story!?

    • soumyav January 17, 2013 / 8:27 am

      have to wait dear! its an very old post! had posted the next parts then..now shall do so again later

  10. drsuraiyanasim January 23, 2013 / 2:18 pm

    Loved the way you wrote this…..chinar leaves are so pretty. It was engrossing.
    Eager to read more. I hope your story gets selected dear….praying for your success.

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