A teaspoon of sugar or a drop of honey,

effect of the sweetness remains even in melancholy,

white crystalline as the crystals,

or translucent viscous as the gel,

changing the bitterness of our tongue,

energising our reflex actions in one…


Added to or dissolved in a drink,

served invisibly in any dessert pudding,

give the same longing taste of sweet tooth,

letting us forget all the stings…


Words and tone are similar ,

in rendering the sweetness of nature,

filling one’s mind and heart ,

with love and gentle behaviour…


A humble tone is adored ,

words compassionate are admired,

A human  being of such a combination,

Is loved by everyone for spreading  the charm…


13 thoughts on “SUGAR & HONEY

  1. Neeraj Kumar June 27, 2012 / 1:12 pm

    Nice comparison.. but I don’t like people being extra sweet when they actually are not..

    • soumyav June 27, 2012 / 3:12 pm

      haven’t used any irony here nor hypocrisy..just wishing that people be humble and sober in their behaviour..

  2. nightlake June 27, 2012 / 2:16 pm

    This one was so well-written. words compassionate are certainly admired:)

    • soumyav June 27, 2012 / 3:13 pm

      Thanks a lot for admiring..

  3. vimal June 27, 2012 / 3:40 pm

    this is true 🙂

  4. Prashant June 27, 2012 / 4:42 pm

    happiness and life have always been about the correct blend of efforts and the nicest of balance of emotions ..
    ..very truly defined !!

    • soumyav June 27, 2012 / 4:45 pm

      truly comprehended..

    • soumyav June 28, 2012 / 2:16 pm

      True Eric! we cant fake everytime.. genuine people are always sweet.

  5. preety92 June 29, 2012 / 5:02 pm

    Too much sweetness can bring diabetics.. 😉 but what you have written above is so true.. One should be humble and gentle in life.. I like this poem! 🙂

      • preety92 June 30, 2012 / 11:27 am

        You’re welcome soumyav 🙂

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