AN EXCEPTIONAL JOURNEY- A RARE WISH


Under the blue spread with white fluffy cotton balls hanging on our  head,

amidst the fluorescent green carpets, laid over mountains and plains,

lies a terrain path full of stones and pebbles,

On which I walk with  barren feet  hurting my delicate veins…

A small  stone suddenly pierces as my foot unknowingly tramples,

the pain I forget because of the frequent shambles,

Long before  when I had started on this road as an  exception,

Everyone around had announced my failure and misery as the result of this gamble…

*****

Smilingly I forgave them all for their consistent displeasure,

as my heart knew the reason for their unknown behaviour,

faith in you ! O my lord! I started this  journey with courage,

Belief in you,sincerity in me, lead me with  my determination ahead…

*****

How far is the destination ? my Lord! questions  my companion,

 who has been with me in my struggled times and years,

Not for me , I have doubt in my  resilience or your miracles,

Seeing the pain and the tears of loved ones , I  ask this out of fear!

Moments of joy and happiness ,I had wished for my dear,

Am I not torturing that  being, by accepting this road of wear,

Or is it that we are tied by our deeds and our fortune,

suffering and enjoying together the music  of destiny in one tune…

*****

Humble note of gratitude to you,for whatever I am today,

asking for your grace  to bestow on my loved dear being,

Even If I move on the mountains or the difficult stony hills,

please take my loved one’s soul to the heaven directly through your blessings…

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24 thoughts on “AN EXCEPTIONAL JOURNEY- A RARE WISH

  1. Pawan Hira

    This journey shall move on. And the grace will add to your dearie one’s, for this love of sharing is a beautiful thing.

      1. Zyrelle Aguda

        ow… that!!! haven’t post in there for a while 😦 that gives me an idea.. i’ll look some vintage shots in my account 🙂

  2. Poignant expression. Your prayer “faith in you ! O my lord! I started this journey with courage,

    Belief in you,sincerity in me, lead me with my determination ahead” are so true.

    Wishing you all the happiness!

  3. Beautifully written!
    Its amazing how beautifully you have captured the beauty of the toughest and unconventional journeys in a frame which one can visualize! In fact I could see this happening around me! 🙂
    As always, your words are powerful!

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