Under the blue spread with white fluffy cotton balls hanging on our head,
amidst the fluorescent green carpets, laid over mountains and plains,
lies a terrain path full of stones and pebbles,
On which I walk with barren feet hurting my delicate veins…
A small stone suddenly pierces as my foot unknowingly tramples,
the pain I forget because of the frequent shambles,
Long before when I had started on this road as an exception,
Everyone around had announced my failure and misery as the result of this gamble…
*****
Smilingly I forgave them all for their consistent displeasure,
as my heart knew the reason for their unknown behaviour,
faith in you ! O my lord! I started this journey with courage,
Belief in you,sincerity in me, lead me with my determination ahead…
*****
How far is the destination ? my Lord! questions my companion,
who has been with me in my struggled times and years,
Not for me , I have doubt in my resilience or your miracles,
Seeing the pain and the tears of loved ones , I ask this out of fear!
Moments of joy and happiness ,I had wished for my dear,
Am I not torturing that being, by accepting this road of wear,
Or is it that we are tied by our deeds and our fortune,
suffering and enjoying together the music of destiny in one tune…
*****
Humble note of gratitude to you,for whatever I am today,
asking for your grace to bestow on my loved dear being,
Even If I move on the mountains or the difficult stony hills,
please take my loved one’s soul to the heaven directly through your blessings…
someone has to be proud and humbly grateful of you being the medium of his destiny and efforts to amalgamate into success personified…
Thank you!
This journey shall move on. And the grace will add to your dearie one’s, for this love of sharing is a beautiful thing.
thanks Pawan!
lovely.. and the photos add to the beauty
Thank you so much
i love how u write.. i can feel it .. its from the heart 🙂
Thanks Zyrelle! i too love to get connected thru ur photos!
ow… that!!! haven’t post in there for a while 😦 that gives me an idea.. i’ll look some vintage shots in my account 🙂
will love to see them! 🙂
cool 🙂
:-)supercool! in Ambigious too! 🙂
The sign of great soul, they remain humble even after going through so much pain and criticism.
Thank you Neeraj!
Poignant expression. Your prayer “faith in you ! O my lord! I started this journey with courage,
Belief in you,sincerity in me, lead me with my determination ahead” are so true.
Wishing you all the happiness!
Thanks a lot! Iam honoured that you could feel those expressions..
Beautifully written!
Its amazing how beautifully you have captured the beauty of the toughest and unconventional journeys in a frame which one can visualize! In fact I could see this happening around me! 🙂
As always, your words are powerful!
Thanks Pankaj for your all time appreciation ! glad you could feel the expressions..
It’s always a pleasure!:)
i love the sentiment behind this…
thank you for these words 🙂
Thanks !
Beautiful.. I could feel the poem..
Thanks a lot !
You’re welcome 🙂