WAVES


Walking  on the shores of life feeling the sunshine,

As we trod in the sands of time,

the waves come and kiss our feet ,

Only to leave us as the waves recede…

 

 

 

Lines added by Prashant:

 

 

they tell us about a life beyond

 in the touch of subtle memories,

 the waves glitter with the rays of hope,

 and few pages of our life’s diaries…

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9 thoughts on “WAVES

  1. SinPSarkar June 20, 2012 / 3:42 pm

    The beauty of the continuity and its ever-changing essence explained beautifully in a short poetry! 🙂

  2. Prashant June 21, 2012 / 8:03 am

    with your permission …

    they tell us about a life beyond
    in the touch of subtle memories
    the waves glitter with the rays of hope, and
    few pages of our life’s diaries

    • soumyav June 21, 2012 / 8:19 am

      I wanted to add one more stanza to it but couldn’t then….this one is perfect…

  3. Eric Alagan June 22, 2012 / 4:23 am

    The waves caress and leave – many metaphors here

  4. dilipnaidu June 25, 2012 / 8:37 pm

    You sure have captured the ‘Waves’ so beautifully’!
    Thanks.

    • soumyav June 26, 2012 / 9:29 am

      welcome with your words of appreciation..

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