demolishing the pane…
darkening the surroundings,
Engulfs the sight…
Streak of silver,
emerging from behind,
dispelling the darkness,
6 thoughts on “VISION”
The last para is a perfect haiku 🙂
the importance of darkness is that in it you actually get to “see” the real you.
your words define in a very positive and subtle manner that the frame holding the perfect picture is as imp as the picture itself.
No wonder you received many awards,your poems are amazing 🙂 keep writing 😉
thanks dear! the likes and comments are my awards! they give the encouragement to go forth and express all… 🙂