Wet view,
watery path,
vision blurred,
destination afar….
Pensive atmosphere,
troubled waves,
disturbing winds,
demolishing the pane…
Hovering greys,
obstruct light,
darkening the surroundings,
Engulfs the sight…
Streak of silver,
emerging from behind,
dispelling the darkness,
illuminating minds…
The last para is a perfect haiku 🙂
thanks 🙂
the importance of darkness is that in it you actually get to “see” the real you.
your words define in a very positive and subtle manner that the frame holding the perfect picture is as imp as the picture itself.
thank you
No wonder you received many awards,your poems are amazing 🙂 keep writing 😉
thanks dear! the likes and comments are my awards! they give the encouragement to go forth and express all… 🙂