Everything  deep inside the heart  becomes void ,

As you aren’t there along my side,

Heart beats can be counted upon,

when the earth stops rotating while you are thought of…

No words ,no expressions, no reactions to show,

Your absence makes me lose my glow..

Busy with my routine and the pending work,

I can’t really make out why I get disturbed?

Is it your thoughts that make my eyes wet,

Or is it for times that we have already spent ?



The music loses its melody making it monotonous..

the night appears lonely with the  moon ‘s exodus,

Deep inside the core  when I miss you and your presence,

The world around me  loses its exuberance…


16 thoughts on “MISS YOU!!

  1. Eric Alagan April 12, 2012 / 9:37 am

    Painful yearnings, bitter sweet memories…

    • soumyav April 18, 2012 / 5:07 pm

      touching moments !! thanks for liking..

  2. Midnighthues July 3, 2012 / 10:46 pm

    Longing for your loved one I see in this and superbly done again!

    • soumyav July 5, 2012 / 1:50 pm

      Thanks a lot Aparna! this indeed is a very old post..

    • soumyav July 28, 2012 / 1:05 pm

      Thanks a lot! and am really sorry for not being in track with your posts as Iam travelling.will catch up wth the missedones once Iam back.till then best wishes and happy blogging

  3. elamany December 11, 2012 / 4:33 am

    beautiful … beautiful … beautiful

    • soumyav December 11, 2012 / 8:16 am

      Thank u dear! for going through this and liking it!

  4. purpleraysblog January 20, 2013 / 2:59 pm

    Very deep. Far from the everyday ‘miss you’ that flood our ears.

    • soumyav January 20, 2013 / 5:29 pm

      Thank you very much

  5. neelkanth February 11, 2013 / 10:28 am

    These few lines of yours speak volumes on pangs of seclusion. I feel like following you, and this I am doing with immediate effect.

  6. Manu Kurup April 10, 2013 / 8:21 am

    A great post, I should say. Deep feelings and love manifesting itself in each words. Good post for reading in the beginning of a fine day. 🙂

    • soumyav April 10, 2013 / 8:45 am

      🙂 True feelings always touch the core ! Thank you

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