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Written for Ermilia’s blog:http://wp.me/p1HrCI-14o “PICTURE IT AND WRITE”

girl-with-a-back-tattoo

The mirror of life 
ornamental ,
exquisitely  intricate,
reflection is

 distinct and clear,
you  glow
 the skin radiates
the milky white 
softness 
of scintillating cleavage  clear!

Alas ! The wondrous pattern 
of  life remains always hidden,
bedecked on your gorgeous back
it is a mystery forever...
neither it explicates 
the logic...
nor the reason of
getting allured...
beautiful butterflies 
fly and allude
trying to convey a message unclear!

Hitherto
 there's no mirror at the rear,
to exhibit 
the truth surreal
Paint a face of vibrant colors
virtually visible to every peer!
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32 Comments

  1. I should rather not know what I look like from the rear!
    Lovely poem.

    • Ha ha! That nobody of us would want to ever ! It was metaphor! :-D

    • Hahahaha I have a tattoo on my shoulder, but any lower than that, I’m with you ;)

      Thanks, Soumyav, for your participation this week.

  2. Exquisite piece of poetry. It’s amazing how such pic could evoke on a sweet metaphor from a talented poet like you.

    • Thanks Uzo! My eyes instantly got stuck over the mirror and there was no looking back! :-)

  3. JUST SO LOVELY.

    • Thanks a lot Sir ! I feel great to know that you enjoy all my pieces even if they are just mere

  4. Exquisite weaving of words from this image, Soumyav. Mirrors are magical, and allow us the ‘more often than needed’ chance to fall in love with ourselves. Love you this beautiful Sunday. ~ Bobbie

    • Thanks Bobbie for letting us have a more insight of the reality of as mirror .true it does give a sense of self indulgence.

  5. Everything is in details…at least that’s what they usually say! :) Beautifully penned, my dear!

    • :-):-) Thanks Ese! loved to know you liked the details!

  6. exquisite.. what a gift you have of words. <3

    • You flatter me Kz…Nowhere like your imagination!

  7. hey Soumyav,
    awesome poem.
    Cheers
    http://www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com

  8. beautiful butterflies
    fly and allude
    trying to convey a message unclear!

    Beautiful poetry – I loved your title and enjoyed reading your poem.

    • Thanks a lot Nina! Lovely to see you here enjoying my poem!

  9. Great Poem. Excellent wording. Inspiring too.

  10. fabulous wordplay!

  11. Simply gorgeous. Enjoyed this one very much. Great work!

  12. Exquisite, charming and reflective ! You ought to pen a book of poetry, dear Soumy!

    I share with you a post that resonates the ‘mirror':

    http://bloodinkdiary.wordpress.com/2012/11/08/what-kind-of-a-facade-shall-i-wear/

    Do check it out when you have free time – though you have penned it much better than my silly offerings at my blog !

    • Thank you dear for the wonderful share! And yes! I do already have three books of poetry published… more in queue :-)

  13. Wowwwww.Its indeed a nice effort from ur side.
    Nicely adorned by ur thoughts & ideas.
    Hats Off……

    • Thank you so much for the appreciation! May I know who’s this!

  14. Beautiful piece!

  15. such a beautiful and lovely poem..thanks for sharing it dear


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