BE LIKE…
An Ocean of love,
like a pearl of wisdom,
a river of affection,
a tree of protection.
firm as a mountain,
soft as the melting wax,
Radiate as the sun,
soothing as the moon,
sparkle like a diamond,
burn like a coal to fuel the soul.
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FOR YOU’RE…
The flower of joy,
with the fragrance of musk,
the muse of my verse
the life of my spirit
enkindled within,
smile of innocence…
affectionate ,
touching…
burning ember of my heart,
the presence of an angel in a human form.
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soumyav 
Oh wow!
This is so very beautiful! 🙂
Thank you John! so good to know that you liked. 🙂
truly, atleast one should learn a prt of these… wonderful…
Yes the qualities that a person should have in him is there in every bit of nature
This is very uplifting and beautiful.
Thank you dear
Fragrance of musk is vividly manifestable in your writings.
Iam overwhelmed by your comment Sir!
wow beautiful
♥ these words ” burn like a coal to fuel the soul “. great feel ..
Thank you Lucia! I know they are the real crude words of dictionary which do add the fuel! 🙂
A symphony of imagery and verse Soumya.
Enchanting,
Eric
Its worth awaiting your comment Eric,for you have the true definition of my verse.
I love it, it is soft and beautiful all at once 🙂
Iam happy Gys that you love dit!
Beautiful artwork and amazing words of love and desire. Thank you.
Thank you John!
i feel just b yourself (b in the way god has made you, you are d only one of your kind) 🙂
Thts very true Nirmal,but I think we should strive to be better always,that which we can be…
May b.
So very outstanding Soumyav! My heart smiles at every line and every word in your poem…so beautifully done! Great Job!
Iam happy Wendell you could feel the depth of it!
Lovely !
My favourite would be :
“burn like a coal to fuel the soul.”.
Lot of paradoxes around here 🙂 You doing alright ?
🙂 Hmm! just a thought of how we should be
How lovely this is! To embrace one’s muse. To find comfort and solace and a soothing rhythm of hope in the heart of another. There is something so mystifying about love. Yet something so very physical in the metaphors we employ to express it.
For more than expressing we try to manifest it in everything and we end up using physical metaphors for such expressions.There is something unique about love,it is a feeling,an emotion,a virtue and a vibration… so the mystery continues. Thanks for sharing your feelings George!
My great pleasure, Soumyav. I appreciate your writing. And your comments.
How uplifting, with beautiful imagery!!
Thank you so much Christy! 🙂
what an amazing poem soumyav! its truly beautiful in and out- the word play and the inner meaning.
Beautifully written! 🙂
Rahul
Thank you Rahul!
Thank you Rahul!
My all time favorite. So full of wisdom and Beauty, as well as human potential! Bravissimo!
:-):-) loved your superlative exclamation Sheri!
wow! its beautiful just like you!
Soumya! It’s just so lovely…every word. I am not so expressive with words but I can surely tell that every time I read your lovely words gives me wonderful feeling…heart touching.
:-)And I do await the comment I would be getting,for that would reflect the intensity with which it touched.
From another universe… Other-worldly… 😀
🙂 Thank you Eric!
🙂 Thank you Eric!
WoW! Everytime I read this I feel great joy from your words. It is beautiful and speaks of the beauty you share. Thank you, mary
So good to see you here Mary! been a very longtime and i too missed your posts! will be there soon.
Soothing flow dear Soumya; like a prayer for me..
Peace & Light
Thanks for your love MIra! Really glad you could feel the air
Thanks for your love MIra! Really glad you could feel the air
How beautiful, Soumyav. I grieve for those who do not, but rejoice in the rare ones who know love, who understand it. Who freely give of themselves, asking only for a soft place to fall. I love this! ~ Ever, Bobbie
you speak of true feelings Bobbie,irrespective of being fallen or giving in, your emotions always have an exquisite thought!