close enough to hear your breath,
warmed by your feelings affectionate,
cruising on the sail of life,
in your arms in darkness of the night.
enchanting melodies sway my locks,
your graceful touch embraces the fall,
drowning in the emotions flooded,
my heart sings an amorous song!
floating in the land of fantasy,
coming back to the reality,
i find myself in your embrace
sleeping calmly …
in the echoes of the LIED!
LIED:( german art or love song!)
nice one soumya…
thank you Shiv! By the way you can check the meaning of ‘LIED’ at the bottom!
Superb!
And yes, the last line was the most important
Thank you Saakshi!
Feels like a dream.
Beautiful.
Thank you dear and I knew you would like it! by the way saw the photos u uploaded on fb,are beautiful!
so full of love and beauty!
Oooooooh, so romantic!
Ditto, beautful!
sooooooooo romantic!!
Thanks Vinay!
Poor me! I kept looking for the ‘lie’ and almost missed the beauty in the song. Good piece
It’s beautiful again!
more lovely to see you here reading this!
Very well-written romantic and sensual poem, Soumya!
Eric
Thanks Eric,glad you like dit!
Aah! Such a nice and beautiful poem, Soumya.. And love the title too..
Sublime and most engaging. Loved it Soumyav! Shukria dost. Cheers.
Iam so overwhelmed and happy you liked it shaheen!
lovely one Soumya
Thank you so much !
I like this. I read your title as the past tense of “lie” – and I was pretty far into the poem before I realized. But it was a pleasant surprise.
…………..exquisite, and I love the ‘hook’ of the lie (the meaning not what we expected to find)……….and I’m so glad, for initially, it broke my heart.
~ Love to you, my dear one. ~ Bobbie
peace of fine art.