Of the whispers that I hear
in music of the wind,
beckoning me!
To fields of swaying joy
under the open sky,
I breathe gayly…
In blithe I close my eyes,
to listen
to your gentle voice…
Amidst the green meadow,
a butterfly comes beside,
to touch and kiss me
a sweet lullaby…
I discover you
in the melody
of its hummed song…
I get absorbed
and soak my heart
in memories
of your love.
Ur lines cud b my painkiller for this seemingly neverending night…awesome…
So melodic.. Rhythmic & lyrical. Beautifully written Soumya.
I feel delighted that you liked this too!
“I discover you in the melody…”, how wonderful is this line!
Its nice to see you enjoying the line Christy! thank you
what a delightful beauty!
Tranquilizer!!!
Peaceful and full of beautiful hope. Written by such a beautiful mind
Thank you for your love Sheri!
How tender and romantic dear! And it has a butterfly in it!!!
Hmm! for you Suri! reminds of you!:-)
Awwww…..thankyou soooo much! You are a dear!
The thoughts are so gentle and yet powerful. Having a quiet moment to just listen to the breeze or to ‘feel’ what cannot be felt in a fast-paced world — it can be life-changing sometimes.
Very truly caught the real gist of the lines! Thanks for being here and the beautiful thoughts
Another beauty! How are you not giving the integral poem?
Captivating. Lovely. <3
N a special like for the image that u've uploaded here.
One more thing (sorry if i am wrong), in the 6th line is it "gayly" or "gaily" ?
Thank you ! and thanks for te image ! it is of shillong in Meghalaya! Its gayly..( in a joyful manner)
Poem with fluttering wings & profound worship to nature… well done!
Thank you sir for precious comments!
sweet…
Thank you Vimal
great!
Thanks Raunak!