(photocredit: the divine light)
Tempered becomes the soul,
whilst it gets heated and burnt like a coal,
in the furnace of life,
with times of pain and sorrows ,
doubled!
***
Enduring becomes the entity,
which gets submerged in the glory of Thee,
forgetting the rest around,
It surrenders itself in HIS lotus feet.
***
Tears of sorrow,or tears of joy,
are only for the divine tie,
where yearning of the soul is for …
to be a part of HIS celestial being…
***
A ray of happiness and bliss shines
glowing the heart radiantly suffice,
as it gets embraced by
the Eternal Master of the Divine Oceanic Stream.
***
Nothing affects the noble soul,
pain or pleasure,
wealth or glamour poured,
sinking in the love of God,
becomes its ecstatic moment…
enthrall…
Pure and true devotion is reflected!Good one
By the way, if you can please read/review my short story Final destination
Thank you Mridula! and I have commented on your story!
Sorry, can’t see any! Through FB?
If you don’t mind, this is the link, you can comment through mail or FB, and it comes there as soon as you post it too, thanks!
http://yourstoryclub.com/short-stories-love/love-short-story-final-destination/
Yes! thru my fb page
Oh! I can’t see any
ok will do so again..
The site is not accepting my comment!
The site is not accepting my comment!
That’s okay then, may be some technical problem
I saw your comment, thanks again
Lovely words from a beautiful person.
Love,
mei
Thank you Mei!
Your expressionism is very effective.
Iam really touched to hear this!
Hello! I wish you great week!
http://marciento.wordpress.com/2013/01/17/winter-zima/
Thank you for your visit and wishes
Very beautiful and heartfelt.
Tim
Thanks for the kind words.
Your image is beautiful and your words make it even more special! A very lovely write!
I feel so happy to hear from you and your words make it more perfect!
Beautiful lines, Soumya. This feels like a continuation to another of your Soul verses you wrote few days back. Just when i was reading the last stanza I realized it flows with one i’ve read before so i went back to your archives to find that post .. Somehow this one follows “A Soul”.. Loved it..
Yes Muzer! and Iam glad you could find the connection..sometimes there is a flow about a subject or topic that tends to take us deep within ,,excavating and uncovering more things from it. such was this one. and it continues to be my fav..so any more to come when i feel that
It happens to be my fav too.. Always love reading about soul and the eternal guide. Something spiritual and calming about those words that hit me..
Love your new background.. Works wonderfully well with your poetry..
Thank you again! I too love that ,coz someway or other tends to calm the troubled waves….
The last para is intact
But, tempered becomes the soul??
Here “tempered ” doesn’t mean good or bad tempered..it is a technique used in heat treatment of steel,where the steel is tempered to a certain state that nothing affects it,it is attuned cor adjusted such by heating ,it becomes resilient after being treated at a certainctemperature. such is the soul which becomes tempered after being through several pains and sorrows of life.
Nice poem as always. I like the picture as well.
Thank you Ramu for your comment!
…..and what a pious and pure soul. really nice.
Thank you my dear!
Beautiful. Great post. Well narrated words.
Thank you !
Beautifully knitted piece! Reflects your true devotion to that Almighty!
Thanks a lot Trisha! so nice to see you here. this is a very old post. thought of posting it today on fb.
Thank god you did! Or else I couldn’t have gone through it!