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SHINING SANDS !


Like shining sands…

sparkling stones

in the sweltering heat…

or the cooling breeze…

I stand alone!

Like waves you come and touch ,

carrying me  in everything…

Slowly washing away my shore…

sometimes a little more…

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Awaiting

 I  hear the lore,

  Of the falling

and rising chores…

What happens if I get washed away…

gradually  getting eroded in the waves…

Have you gathered my tits and bits…

which got  absorbed in your dreams …

Like lost sands

…each particle gets lost…

in the gravels  of time…in past,

with the collapsing tides which dart,

while struggling  to anchor

  the existence beneath its earth!

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32 comments on “SHINING SANDS !

  1. Soumya, this is very lovely indeed.

    Much love,
    mei

  2. I like it, Soumya! :) Eric

  3. Quite a romantic poem. Liked it. :)

  4. Only, that there is no one else but ourselves, who can rescue us :)- but again, that is what I believe and could be mistaken…. :)

  5. Lovely writing!excellent stuff.

  6. You captured the emotions of sand so beautifully, Soumya.. If they could talk this is what they’d think.. :-)

  7. beautiful…. “I stand alone”…awaiting…..” ❤

  8. Very nice and expressive..a thinking mind :-)

  9. great stuff Soumya. Nature is a collection of destruction and creation. When things get eroded at one place, the eroded material settles down somewhere else to give rise to an entirely new creation.Similarliy your thoughts have settled somewhere and given rise to a new creation there.

  10. You handle your pen brilliantly in dealing with love and pain

  11. Beautiful expression of emotions that all humans feel. We simply articulate it differently. Thank you precious Soumya

  12. The title of this post is very nicely illustrates your artistic soul , just so was what you said “art in my heart , I really like this sentence have nice day

  13. nicely worded :-)

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