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As a traveller I roam and move,

to the  destination miles apart,

I come across through different places,

with various distinct landscapes…

 

Nature blossoming somewhere,

another land  dries lying dead…

Rivers gushing with splendid force,

Also sandy deserts where it rains…

 

Land of civilizations sparkling,

far away…

barren with  drought

the fields despair…

 

Races mixed with different genres,

moving past , frictioning ,

Bloodpath somewhere is flooded …

in another corner of the earth…

 

Varied people I have met,

Their eyes do speak  the thoughts within,

Cheaters,dupers,hypocrites,

swindlers,frauds conning…

Some steal money,

some peace of mind,

dignity snatched somewhere,

crushed is the genuineness sublime…

 

What frustration they carry,

why such confusion in minds,

what is the gem they are seeking,

killing the conscious benigned  smile…

 

Every soul a different reflection,

Still they are sons and daughters of the same Creator Divine…

What makes them  go in unlike ways,

few becoming human,

some going astray…

What shall make them

moveth forth

on the path of  righteousness …

Stop for a while ..

O! MY Lord!

to dawn them with your consciousness.

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46 Comments

  1. Your psalm was beautifully written and shines radiantly with a strong true message…I loved every word that your spirit and heart shared! God bless Soumyav!

    • Thank you Wendell for the wonderful thought you shared here ! Its always great to have your wishes

  2. Lovely! A genuine plead against violence and violations is what I see in these verses. Brilliantly woven.

    • Thank you Subashini! True sometimes our heart just speaks out!

  3. Beautiful writing on all the excesses

    • Its really good to see you Gys enjoying my lines!

  4. Superb !

  5. The ones who steal peace of mind are the WORST!!!!

  6. I like that your conscious to see the world around you in all its beauty!

    • We just have that Christy,if we can’t find happiness and beauty around,rest of things just seem temporary!

  7. Your words are exquisite.

  8. “Every soul a different reflection,
    Still they are sons and daughters of the same Creator Divine…”
    So true we are all so similar yet so different!

    • Yes Muzer! this distinctness should be our uniqueness and not a reason of discrimination.

  9. Nature vs. nurture depicted eloquently Soumya!

    • Thank you Aparna! wonderful to see your nice new gravatar image!

  10. I think its something like, for every well doing, there should be someone to retract it. In fact for every single kind hearted, we find many who never have the same. May by because of this the person was true & has some values or has made some beliefs on other. It’s like we human were able to differentiate between the two, then only someone trust worthy was recognizable.

    But whatever it is, as you said, its also important, that how would one nurture these people and change their mind indeed

    • Thanks for getting in the depth! INdeed its important how to maintain the balance!

  11. Some steal money,

    some peace of mind . . . . . . . . ” Outstanding description ” .

    • Thank you NIrav! Iam happy you liked and felt the depth!

  12. Well versed, this one… simple and worth thinking about.

  13. Aap ki kavita ke liye itna hi kahunga, aap ke bhitar baithe parmatma ko mera namaskar

    • Mera ahobhagya!

      • aap pur to parmatma ki krapa hai, hum to sirf dua karte hain

  14. Nice poem soumyav :)

    • Thank you Vikram ! Its great to hear from you!

  15. it is an art to be able to write what the HEART says and you sure have that talent ..
    a lovely poem

    on a tangent .. a Traveller is lucky they get to experience so much and learn so much in the travels

    • Thank you Bikram for the lovely words ! Iam glad you could feel the journey

  16. enjoy the journey

  17. Beautiful…

  18. seen from the eyes of a traveller..different people with different mindsets..a lovely poem

    • Thank you dear! Yes it does give us a different perspective !

  19. Written beautifully. I have to struggle for writing even 3/4 lines. You write so well.

    • I feel so honoured hearing this from you! Thank you!

  20. isnt it a joy!

    • Yes! continously on the move! seeing the world like a traveller

    • Yes! continously on the move! seeing the world like a traveller

  21. Beautiful poem :)


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