In the melancholic times,
words get lost like bemused,
chasing illusory altitudes…
whereas a song keeps on playing …
in the background!
piercing notes go deep within,
harping the strings severely,
leaving a shrill feeling …
in the core of the soul’s being!
The frictional touch bleeds the veins,
even though the sound resonates,
A song of nostalgic pains,
echoes in the subjugating place…
Leaving behind the soul in somberness,
The heart moves with driftness…
brushing past from the touching tunes,
On a casual formal pathway!
It is very deep. I like
You are very dear ! Thanks for going into the depth!
Smiling to your word’s heartfelt insight.
Thanks for the visit and for going thru!
Defined melancholy to the T. The last stanza resonates with you and the paradox of the last line – casual formal pathway.
Thank you dear for loving it!
Thank you dear for loving it!
Oh like this….the first few lines…so true.
Iam glad Boomie ..you could feel them
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Another beautiful work of art! You are such an awesome poet with a great ear : )
Oh! Thanks Shawn! and how lovely is your comment as well! feels good to hear it!
Awesome portrait!
Rahul
Touched me deep inside. Thank you beautiful soul.
great to see u here!
awesome………
thanks a lot ! for your presence and going thru!
Wow! Its beautiful with intense depth! I loved it soumya!
Thank you Trisha! great to see u here and enjoying this!
so very true!
Thank you dear
What would our hearts be without the moments like these… Beautifully “knitted” , dear.
Its nice dear friend to see u enjoying the lines
Haunting and lovely.
Thank you dear!
Nice. Kind of my situation.
thank s
Its like swimming through warm waters…
Thank you Manu! and its great to see you back !
It is good to be back, Thanks Soumya.
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