With the blanket of love and tender touch,
you warm my coldness with the rug,
My heart had freezed with cold of pain,
aching spirit ,soul disdain…
I looked up whenever in distress,
finding none who could realize the same,
I always found the smiling you,
observing me from a distant place…
As I become weary in the scorching sun,
You shade like a tree in my way,
Thirsty I become in the dry,
you drench me with the falling rain!
When I dream of a thought,
and hope to aspire,
you pave path for me…
to realize the wish…!
When I get lost and fatigue …
You give me comfort ,
giving me rest…
Infusing more enthusiasm..
and the zeal of living providing me a fresh inhale!
This is very moving and quite impressive. Your image is perfect. Blessings, Barbara
Thank you Barbara for your kind visit here and going thru this piece. Best wishes for a happy new year!
beautiful poem
Thank u dear!
this was really lovely, Soumya..wanted to let you know that you were the blogger with most comments in my blog. Thank you so much for that:))Wish you a fabulous New Year
Hey thanks and the same goes for here too!
mutual admiration
it was really worth reading. Truly it was very enthusiastic poem
Thank you Kamlesh
you’re welcome
worthy tribute! well written.
Thank you Meenakshi for liking it!
Late Happy New Year Dear !!!!!!!!!!!!
the long road is always made less difficult when one is aware of and has unwavering faith
in the Protector
thank you for sharing this Truth
Welcome !
and its good to know you could get the feel of the truth thru this words!
beautiful poem..
wishing and hoping everyone has a protector like that to protect.. sometimes it seems the protector vanishes ..
Happy new year Mam…
Thank you! He is always there..the faith of believing in him just vanishes!
You are right but I am right too..
you as per your belief and I as for mine!
Creativity materializes from the soul… perfect words…
Iam grateful for your compliment!
Beautiful!!! (the poem
)
Thank you
Your words touched me deeply where the spirit years for that certain comfort…I embrace the beauty of the words as a smile comes alive as only you can do in your very unique and special way! Awesome poem my sister, very awesome!
Thank you Wendell for the morning presence here!
Beautifully written! We all travelling through the trenchant paths of melodrama coming in the form of variety of challenges. But still we do sustain in life with better hope and fulfillments.
Rahul
Very true Rahul! sometimes we ignore the facts ,how do we survive in such circumstances..theres a ray of hope and force that always guides us… and we can find it within
Hmm, yeah! It has got +ve as well as -ve influences as well.
Rahul
wonderful one soumyav, what a blessed feeling it is to have a feeling like this one.
And this feeling lets us go!
love this one! great one Soumya!
Thank you dear!