This week’s writing challenge is to finish “I wish I were…” and here is my beautiful small wish…..
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I wish I were an angel of the heaven,
from where I could get a glance ,
of everyone on this beautiful earth,
peeping inside their minds and hearts…
I wish I could sprinkle some humanity on the barren land,
where humans have forgotten to respect their species and clan…
I wish I could use my wand and let sorrows vanish from the broken hearts,
spreading a bit of golden sunshine in everyone’s empty courtyard…
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I wish I could twirl around…
and do some magic to re-liven the spirits
of the dead souls on the earth,
who are supposed to be exquisite…
I wish I could talk to the ones,
who have loved me so dearly,
that Iam not born to be with them…
but here for some other important responsibility…
I wish I could show the mirror of the mind to the lonesome losers,
showing them the power within to change the world in a second…
I wish I were able to express my feelings that lay subdued within,
To the one whom I adored ,who got lost in life’s living…
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Thats a beautiful wish!
Thank you Archana!
I wish I could write such eloquent prose! Bravo as always.
Thanks Millie for liking it..
nice
the last two lines are about you or someone else?
of course someone else..If Iam the angel…then they are for someone else..
lovely!
Thank you so much Denise!
Thank you so much Denise!
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Thanks for being here and reblogging!
angels are wonderful wishes and how we need them…beautiful words.
Thanks a lot Sunshine! your presence and words bring more light..
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Lovely! And you are not less than an Angel! May be a human, you still bring smile to my face, no matter how upset I be! You still mend my broken smiles! And it’s always soothing talking to you!
Thank you Pankaj! for assuring me that !
my wish seems to have come true!
You actually dreamed of something already bestowed onto you!
Amen
Thanks.
beautiful conclusion..
Thank you!
Amen
thanks dear!
Very nicely done, and the images were all so superb!
Thank you for loving this!
I wish that too, fabulous wish from a beautiful soul
Thanks Amany ! you are always there with me.
Thanks dear
I connect so much with a few parts of your poem. I’m so glad and thankful that you posted this
Thts so good that you liked and gt connected..
just loved, loved, loved it
Iam happy you loved it..