Mysterious dark night brightened in moon-lite,
ardent atmosphere soaking the spirit of love,
your phrases wooing with grandeur,
I remain calm with all my fervor…
Journey of space between traversed,
within few minutes of getting accustomed,
soliciting expressions made verbal,
you asking for explicit behaviour!
I stop and pause this moment here,
For this isn’t the path I admired,
mute and speechless I remain,
my blushes are the ones I cannot tame!
What loving and zealous the brightness feels,
still somewhere within my heart weeps,
Alas! ablaze is the flare …
burning within…
Hoping and desiring
for a momentous begin…
Beautiful! Missed out many posts, I know! Have been doing busy with all the Pooja and Performances! Will catch up the roll soon! And this was simply beautiful! Enough to make it felt!
Thank you Pankaj to catch up here! hope your progs are going great and rocking! iam happy you liked it
great blog! happy to check it out!
Thank you dear! shall visit yours soon.
I am given to understand that readers’ perception of any writeup is coloured by their state of mind and not so much as what the writer is trying to say. So it might just be me, but it fits well for one of my friends who is having a terrible marriage.
Amazing play of words !
Thank you Tatsat for reading and going through this.Yes mostly it depends on the reader how and what perception he carries for the words.The same set of words may have different meaning for another..as for me Iam glad you could co relate to something form this.
fabulous one soumyav. loved it.
Thank you sharmishtha!
you make romance sound like music
i’m speechless!
sounds scandalous!
sometimes thoughts are scandalous !
sometimes thoughts are scandalous !
It is a moment well captured, and I can see you alive. It is in surrender to the love, you chance upon beautiful things in life. This sudden moment of light, I love. Your journey is beautiful, Soumya.
Thank you Pawan for getting the real essence.. . tough though …it is the moment..,that speaks of itself..
nice poem, enjoy the state of dualities. its a bliss.
Thanks NIrmal!
Don’t know why I’ve seen a heart-torn-page behind this:( may it all be well
&by the way tame not your blush; “Blushing is the color of virtue”…
Peace & Light
Thank you Mira for seeing the page behind..Just a momentary one…Impulsive one rather.Guess we all go thru such instances sometime… and yes by the time Iam replying you back..al becomes fine again!
i believe in your concluding words- i dont think there are two souls that are each other’s clone.
we become friends, lasting friends with compatible souls not our clones i guess…
wrong number, it was for the new post
Now Iam getting accustomed to your style of commenting!;-)
hee hee
i copy pasted the comment in appropriate place this time.
very true dear! well caught
the words..
Mind-blowing one, Soumyaji!
Rahul
Thank you Rahul!
Mesmerizing image and words! Your heart’s words shine through so radiantly!
Thank you so much WEndell! its an honour and blessing when the words affect you.
My screen was actually smoking by the time I finished reading! Intense passion not just smouldering, but more, yet still she weeps – emotions against desire
Iam really happy you liked the post and could feel the passion and the emotions. Thanks..
A shy heart and the wait for the momentous time to let passions flare……very romantic.