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Breathing the air of my land


Breathing the air of my land… walking  bare feet on the soil where I lived,

does  nostalgia fill in  your ambitious dreams…

The steps you imprint on the wetness,

reverberate in my ears unsaid,

echoing your heavy sighs,

that you just  exhaled…

Can you see the fluorescent green fields,

swinging in music of the neighbouring stream…

Did you hear my voice there,

in the sounds of the nature clean?

Did you ever trod on the path,

that went straight to my old house,

to have a glimpse of the place,

where I once lived subdued…

Does the wind that sways your hair,

misconstrues in your sense ,

for my fingers running through the strands,

calming you when you are stressed!

Did my thoughts enwrap you,

whilst walking  past my 

old journey…

Did such  epheremal moment …

got birthed … 

on the soil where I was born…

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22 comments on “Breathing the air of my land

  1. Memories of days gone by are always special. You once again prove it!

  2. Never thought I miss home this much till reading this with twinkle in my eyes..

    Peace & Light

  3. sweet memories waiting to be shared :-)

  4. A beautiful walk through your treasured dreams…the images are also very lovely!

  5. This poem is a treasure of memories. Well done!

  6. When you remember beautiful memories, you know how to live again.
    That is how you painted this one. Beautiful and easily it fuses in me. Amazing!

  7. beautiful… carries the breeze of home to whoever reads the words

  8. There are the two themes here, I see. The first s the deeply emotional and recognisable home, the nostalgia, The other theme, the universal contact with nature. I thought it revealing and sensual that you put her barefoot in the first line, to really feel the soft grass, damp soil. How many people put layers on themselves to keep a distance from nature – not from the sun – well, many do. I like that need to touch, to feel you put.

    • Yes its so true! the touch of nature is itself amazing and nostalgic… there is nothing that can bring a smile on a face or tears rolling suddenly besides being in absolute touch wth nature…thanks for sharing wth us the wonderful view and thought.

  9. Nostalgic and enchanting……like the musty perfume of wet soil of one’s homeland.

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