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” Honestly , I have a crush on you,”

he uttered with a soft whisper,

A little surprise and with a blush,

she moved aside her locks ,

to have a glimpse of her own …

“Is he joking or having fun,

teasing me with a brilliant pun”,

wondered she with confused thoughts,

his words had broken her silence form…

“Your words ,your smile…

you in every form,

I would  love to be with you

in dreams to adorn…

the dried withered heart of mine,

which laughs and laughs..

and when alone it whines…”

confessed the young charming man,

in the middle of darkness,

when the world sleeps ,

but his feelings uncapped…

“Give me a drop of passion you have ,

to let me get the taste of it,

how does it feel to have a heart…

full of passion for everything”,

His voice echoed in her ears,

smilingly she sipped some water…

and said 

“You will get the passion you want ,

even if you are a separate entity,

If words connect thoughts,

feelings bond the  hearts,

emotions tie the souls within,

You will float in a passionate form,

amidst this mean  world of  living beings…”

 

 

 

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32 Comments

  1. so very true!

    • Thanks Sharmishtha for reading this.

  2. Yet More Love in your blog! Loved it! :)

    • Thank you!:-)

  3. nice poem. passion travels through vibrations.

    • Very truly read Nirmal! You just caught the nerve of the poem.. :-)

      • thxmay b these are also vibrations :-)

        • Hmm true! .. :-)

          • A poet lives by intution and inution is all about vibrations isn’t?

            • Yes because it doesn’t has any logic to explain… and cannot be seen..as vibrations

              • true its like fragrance, you can only feel it, but in explaining probably all words will fail. but a poet helps in uncovering the mystery of nature through intution.

                • yes.. absolutely..

                • but not all poets experience this,very few go beyond the depth they can realize this..

                  • i fully agree with you saumya in this. i feel poetry comes to you. it is bestowed upon you.
                    one can’t plan and write. it does not have logic. may be its an outflow of love.

                      • soumyav
                      • Posted October 16, 2012 at 9:45 pm
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                      yes it is just a form of blessing..

                      • Nirmal Bajwa
                      • Posted October 16, 2012 at 9:48 pm
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                      and you are a blssed soul dear. God bless.

                      i feel the world will be more beautiful, if our news paper have headlines of artists, musucians, poetry rather than covering scams and murders.

                      • soumyav
                      • Posted October 16, 2012 at 10:03 pm
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                      That is a noble wish ..and thanks for the wishes.

                      • Nirmal Bajwa
                      • Posted October 16, 2012 at 10:08 pm
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                      :-)

  4. Yes, passion has its ways…invisible, yet so powerful and unpredictable. You have created its curves and patterns in such a fabulous way, Soumya.

    • Thank you so much dear! you add a touch of your own in your comments.. :-)

  5. Your poem was like a river in the early hours of morning…. :)

    • Thank you so much Manu for that!

  6. Painted with the warmth of spring…
    Peace & Light

  7. Ah, passion, what would we do without it. Your poems are always passionate. This one is outstanding!

    • Thank you so much June..Yes wthout passion we are nothing…

  8. You are an amazing poet who can express feelings with such zeal. Admire you. thanks for this lovely piece.

    • Thanks Trishanka! thanks for the love and liking!

  9. Passion is himself a very big mining. You prove by your post. Very nice one. I loved your post…

  10. i can see myself in some of the lines :-)


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