Seems you have forgotten the sweet muse of yours,
which always played to you an elegant masterpiece,
doesn’t the melody of the song reverberate,
your heart with the echoing trails?
The vibrations of the beats,
the soft musical notes,
were only striked ,
to love you more…
Nostalgic moments of togetherness dreamt,
which never happened nor ever will,
in the garden of the dreams,
where we wish to spend the day with things unseen…
Was it only words of your wish ,
or you really ever meant the intense feel,
might be I got overflowed,
submerged in the ocean of feelings forlorn…
inspite of the void gaps in between,
waiting for the warm notes that I had seen,
my nature can never change my trueself,
even if I stop remembering you any instant…
but times do change as the seasons,
someday conditions will be just reversed,
hope you get the faith to go on then,
for I wont be able to solace you …. from heaven..
Portrays so clear of a person changed over time! Yet the Last stanza giving hope remains a masterpiece! Loved reading this as same are my words to some of my good friends around!!
Your words are powerful!
Thanks a lot Pankaj! indeed change in life is evident but hope always brings a sunshine..
Because hope is something that keeps one going!
And for some people, hope is the only thing and meaning that they live!
faith is not dependent on desires or physical closeness…it is rather derived from a mental state of being in consonance with the emotional thought process of the two hearts….so well written !
…the one who would forget – would loose his own state of content !
Very truly explained Prashant! its our emotions and silence of two hearts that bring the closeness and faith..
Awesome Soumya! Seems one is constant and the other changes… quite natural…constant faith can play a catalyst to bring back the bliss
indeed Aparna,its our faith that moves evrything in life.. glad u liked it..
Loved the way you have kept the words flowing.
Nice poem.
Thanks a lot for liking it